Black Poetry : Da Light (halloween tale)

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Devilish demons
    forbidden garden
    the light no longer
    ya safe harbor
    for the mix of worlds
    now the groundz of
    the underworld
    he kissed the weak
    with da thrist and
    tame the fear of
    humans da blood
    will paint the city
    tonight and ya soul
    will be lost forever
    da screams & cries
    will be heard
    he here to destroy
    the villian of terror
    he now intimidate
    da glairs of light
    to darkness
    he the true terrorists
    from hell
    wakening da lots of
    mask his darkness
    covers wit fog & mist
    without faith ya fate
    is deadly dis halloween
    the day he return
    the night he take souls
    what seem sweet is
    sour and bitter da
    NEMESIS pits await u
    from da steps of hell
    watch how u trick o treat
     
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    ok ya got me with this one....
    the light no longer a safe habor
    what on earth is goin on
    like he open up the pit
    for ua all to fall in this tale
    of the creepy that lurks on dis night
    loving the scribe...
    Peace
    Angel

    behave stop scaring me Rich
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    faith and faith along is the only hope
    he vow to not touch a child of GOD

    get right with the holy spirit to be saved from
    da demons of hell light is no longer helpful
    he been on the land too long he watching !!!
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    welll the way i see it is...
    ummmm..move over ya sharing ya key board
    you will be having company...:)
    Packing bags now.....
    thank ya gone scare me..shoot
    now ya got to protect me
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    boo !
    let da shadow of death
    be ya guide and warm u
    in the pits for he want
    ya soul
    give in and save a nother
    for halloween

    get under the bed .....naw
    hide in the cupboard ...shoot naw
    come to my house in prayer yeah !
    hurry up before 8
     
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    Get thee behind me Jesus. I suppose there is no refuge. I want a black casket by the way, hey you started this, so you've got to foot the bill for the funeral. The fright continues....
     
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    for when the NEMESIS contain ya soul
    ya body burns in eternal pits of fire
    da bill paid from ya fears da death angel
    consume u , da tomb awaits u in da
    UNDERWORLD .........happy u vow ya soul
    Madness continues :thanks: :whip:
     
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    Yeah baby, lovin the way you're continuin the Halloween theme....dig this piece here
     
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    interesting piece, I was feelin it, but who is this NEMISIS i see in your poems?
     
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    the madness of the worse kind
    from da underworld of destruction
    he comes today for his halloween prey
    he's the bad dream u see the creepy noise
    u hear and the shadow of death he 's here !

    thankz gempis & define
     
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