Black Poetry : Da Letter pt 1

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    How do you take me
    Can you feel me
    do u know I am real..
    A person with feelin
    One who care one
    Who adore…you
    And wish to share…
    all I have
    At times I wonder..
    what am I tryin to see
    When you blind me
    around every corner..
    close then ya move back
    a roller coaster ride..
    dayum boy…
    I been hurt just the same…
    Seems like ya blame me..
    I aint no game from
    the five an dime…I am real
    feel me
    touch me
    relate to me
    hold me…..
    it time to communicate
    my love needs to feel you
    from the beginnin
    I spoke my words….
    They are my bond…
    My love is pure my
    heart is whole..
    my spirit is of you
    I believe in you
    I trust in you..
    We may run into problems..
    But the foundation is laid…
    And I am not movin
    From my ground..
    You’re my
    King
    I am
    Your
    Queen…
    I took this chance..
    If ya feel the same…
    Baby make me feel it…
    My love is yours…
    Not going anywhere…
    I love you…..

    a blakcangel thang.....
     
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    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was beautiful.

    Elegantly scribed.

    Let him know, this is love.
     
  3. PloeMorphic

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    Bless,
    Tyte flow. I really like.
     
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    With words posed like this, how could he not know? Very heartfelt.
     
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    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes, i agree with everyone else before me. i'm really diggin' this piece, dear poetess. girl, don't stop lettin' him know what's up. communication is needed at all tymes. keep on scribin', as i continue to watch.
     
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    thanks for da love and support family means alot...:angel1:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    THE LETTER OF WHOAAAAAAAAAA!
    this was very sweet and beautifully written
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow thank you $$Rich$$...that means alot wow:angel1:
     
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