Khasm13 : da ill villian....jack is back(caution)

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  1. Khasm13

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    *dr. octagonecologyst playing in da background*


    my latest victim is strung and hung on a meat rack
    they scream in horror as one by one fingers go crackkkkkkkkkk
    then i insert dirty giant needles in their stomach
    pushed so far in…the tips peeks thru their back
    hahahahaha….who wants to f_k with jack?....no one
    i control the forces of the night like a dark shogun
    animals with acute senses look at me then scamper and run
    when they see my pale façade walking down the street
    in my trench coat i carry a meat clever to greet the weak
    and the stong…i love it when the struggle lasts long
    i start to hum a song as i pick up his bloody liver with a prong
    Which I later dry out and chop up to smoke in my bong
    demented with sins never repented…a twinge of a sour smell is hinted
    from all the dreams and brittle bones i’ve splintered
    my craft has made me self-centered
    i lust to bust guts like a supreme fiend because i’m the world’s most evil tormentor
    enter….the bloodstained winter…my work is never dun cause lil demons look up to me as a mentor
    for my precious prey that looks in awe….their death-stroke is a tad bit gentler
    i love to slash and gash....your spleen I’ll smash and mash
    foolish mortal did u forget the exquisite skull bash
    which gives my putrid skin a pleasurable rash
    even if you dash and run quick fast
    just around the end of the bend
    i’ll be there….your friend
    ready to send this rusty ice pick up yo hmmmmmmm…….
    hahahahahahahaha!!!!

    *paging dr. jack jones…your next patient is ready*
     
  2. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh my gawd.... :spinstar:

    Demons look up to him as a mentor...whoa

    Khasm...u should really explore more creative
    writing...poetry is not big enough to hold
    your gift, talent and skill.../ I can easily
    see this being a film or comic book series...

    Love your flava...

    Always,...the President of the fan club

    *Khasm Rules*​
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

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    ya skillz are just tuned
    the suit you wear is a blessing
    and i can see you doing a book of
    some kind..the creativity and your mental
    takes me with you on a ride
    loving your vibe my brother
    this was one of a kind but then again
    your one of a kind.....:)

    Peace
    Angel
     
  4. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    man dis what i needed to feel
    the destruction loving dis here
    see JACK is hell on earth and the
    Demons sweetheart of treat !!!!!

    let Jack continue to be da villian of hell
    he's BACKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKK!!!!!!!
     
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    HALLOWEEN MADNESS OF JACK !

    he's Backkkkkkkk!!!!!!!!!
     
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    Good Lawd, this was heinous, but what else should I expect from Jack? Now this was pure horror!!!!! Props to you on this......whoa!!!!!
     
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    I agree with angelic - your writing is bigger than the poet's page, brother.
     
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    Da villian of Jack is back
    halloween never will be the same
     
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    Da Demons Boss JACK'S BACKKKKKKK for another tale spin
     
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    Da villian is sinister, and he's back.
     
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