Black Poetry : Da Flow

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by alter, Mar 15, 2003.

  1. alter

    alter Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    a relentless flow
    introduces chaos into
    multidimensional grooves
    Schmoov moves rock da neurons
    in da galactic dance of rump shakin
    planets rotatin ponderously
    kickin it like omniversal thugs
    with super-string fingers
    workin dark energy like synergy
    searchin for da back beat
    dey feet poundin steady thrums
    drummin heady dumdadumdum
    quantum
    leapin into alternate dimensions
    the tension rises higher and higher
    on waves of light
    fire and desire shinin bright
    despite fright's delight
    witholdin sight

    a stupendous flow
    checks chaos at da do'
    hi fives dem live tribes and
    dances to solar grooves inside
    world-sized hives floatin in space
    silver worlds hurled into the void
    them boys in spacer suits
    with monster gluts and wicked pecs
    livin life on the wild side
    buckin laser-glocks and
    explosive rocks dat rock da hood
    into another galactic neighborhood
    while dem wild childs sang out loud
    inhaling clouds of narcotic bliss
    whilst we remisce
    'bout da ultimate diss

    a hype flow
    goes beneath da skin
    morphin molecular chains
    and wakin up comatose brains
    with trains of thought sought
    throughout time remindin gods
    of reptilian dreams and cyborgian fiends
    quarks dance through atomic eternities
    runnin from paternity
    fathers of invention
    bringers of dissention unmentioned
    their tension lessens blessins
    messin with sessions of flow
    progressions of consciousness
    legions of monstrousness
    destroyed ages ago

    a blessed flow
    awakens the dead
    steady rockin that galactic vibe
    born aloft on a crestin tide of primal power
    encapsulated in towering spires of
    divinity's desire afire
    aspirin higher than earthly bounds
    astoundin ears only used to
    hearin about fears
    while headz hold back tears
    and dance till dawn's arrival
    in survival mode turned back into toads
    after the omniversal ball's
    last call
     
  2. Nahshon

    Nahshon Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    **** that flowed
    through my soul
    sorta like cosmic control

    I really enjoyed...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dis was flowin'
    and it seeps into my mental fast
    now u got da mic .......lovin it
     
  4. Legacy21

    Legacy21 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Peace, peace dear old friend. This joint rocked and flowed on a galatic level. Heads aint't ready for the ultimate cosmic hip hop vibe you laid down here. As always this is a hot joint, and you got my mind rockin to the mental beat of your words....
     
  5. alter

    alter Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lol @ legacy ... tanke tanke nashon & rich, fuh dah readz ... jes checkin' out'chall's spot heah.
     
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    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Uh huh!!!

    The flow of this was just brill!!!! No doubt!

    Respect
    Reas
     
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    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Tyte flow, yo! You came wit it!
     
  8. lilcherry76

    lilcherry76 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    if you flow any deep,
    you'd dig a pit.
    keep it real,
    that's all i got to say--that's it........(lovin it!)
     
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