Black Poetry : Da Feeling 2 Be Luved By Some1 U Luv

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  1. Aaliyahmonet

    Aaliyahmonet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Do u luv da way ya man holds u,
    Da way dat he touches yo every move,
    It's da greatest feeling in da world,
    2 feel special 4 da person u luv,
    Do u like da words he whispers in ya ear,
    Or da romantic phrases dat u wanna hear,
    Da way he takes u under his wing,
    And makes u feel like u're everything,
    When u're feeling down, he picks u off da ground,
    And tells u dat he luvs u, he'll make all ya fantasies come tru,
    He kisses ya on da lips, and starts kissin ya fingatips,
    And then u both start 2 embrace,
    Da feeling 2 be luved by some1 u luv,
    It's da greatest feeling in da world,
    A man who makes u feel so high,
    U feel like u can fly,
    2 just be free, 4rm all da pain and suffering,
    U'll neva have to worry about a thing,
    Because he'll alwayz be there,
    U start standin outside in da rain,
    Feelin da wind touchin on ya skin,
    U start getting those bumps everywhere,
    And da chills hit ya here and there,
    U go back inside and run ya favorite bath,
    U smell da sweet aroma of honey on ya lap,
    U sit down and start to relax ya body,
    Slowly u begin to close ya eyez,
    And he jumps right beside u,
    U feel his fingas runnin down ya spine,
    U're sippin ya favorite wine,
    He says lets make love tonight,
    U accept his iinvitation,
    A bed of roses and sum sensation,
    U take him by da hand,
    Then ya start 2 hold each other in da arms,
    2 luvas 2getha,
    U feel so soft and smoove,
    Silky as a feather,
    Then u both start 2 embrace,
    Da greatest feeling in da world,
    2 be luved by some1 u luv,
    He starts to kiss u down to ya toes,
    And u begin 2 squeeze him close,
    Da roleplay is feeling good 2 da both of u,
    And u begin 2 kiss him down his chest,
    He begins to caress ya back,
    And kisses ya neck,
    U begin 2 moan slowly,
    Because he's da 1 and only,
    And then u both start 2 embrace,
    Da greatest feeling in da world,
    2 be luved by some1 u luv.

    AM:heart:
     
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    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice flow...good to see you and yo man enjoying each other.
     
  3. Aaliyahmonet

    Aaliyahmonet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    4 sho. I think u know who dis poem is really about don't u? lol:)

    AM
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    woooweeeee! sweet embrace of da one ya wit
    love him as he loveth u
    very beautifully expressed

    my Guardian Angel
     
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    Aaliyahmonet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you my king art thou. lol:) Rich u da best.

    AM
     
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    beautiful... felt the passion
     
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    Aaliyahmonet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks cindy and amberly 4 da nice and thoughtful words.

    1 luv,

    AM
     
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    sarcasm4eva Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    daayyyummmm, that was a good one......make me wanna get my man.lol keep doin ur thing, im feelin all ur poems btw....pretty name
     
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    Oooooooooooooooh sista girl!

    yes mam! You conquered the lova in all of us with this one. Made me stay up a little longer ...making me believe that the love can be stonger!!!!!!!!!! So I'm back in the game and saying his name softly ...in my prayer! Knowing that "he will alwayz be there"!
    Loved it sista it was beautiful as always!
    Blessings On Ya House!
     
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    Aaliyahmonet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    4 sho

    I just had to keep it real 2 all da fellas out there. I had to express sum luv 2 everybody and defined what da word luv really means. I thank all of u 4 your responses. I think this is da best one i wrote.:)

    1 luv,

    AM:heart:
     
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