Black Poetry : da farealness of da heart

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  1. sweettee29

    sweettee29 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you have penetrated my mind

    its a lovely opportunity of you

    your presence is so amazing

    blazing from afar

    i have never touched

    yet you have penetrated my mind

    i listen and honor the words of my king

    i rise on the opportunity of you

    my focus grows brighter

    you have touched my hearts core

    we have one final connection

    can we burst together

    as you penetrate my mind forever


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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    penetrating deep within
    mentally connecting
    like sweet sunshine
    yes let's burst together
    one long time inside
    this penetrating ride

    what a sweet release
     
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    lovely mental excursion....

    one love
    khasm
     
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    choclatangel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Beautiful...I would say more but I'm tearing up. This struck a chord in me.
     
  5. sweettee29

    sweettee29 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$ THANKS FOR THE LOVE YOU ALWAYS BESTOW UPON ME

    KHASM YOU DO NOT KNOW WHAT HONOR YOU HAVE LAID ON ME FOR COMMENTING ON MY WORK THANKS

    AND CHOCLATANGEL I PROMISE I WAS NOT TRYING TO BRING NO TEARS BUT THANK YOU FOR FEELING ME I AM TOUCHED THAT I TOUCHED YOU

    AND OF COURSE MUCH MUCH LOVE SWEETTEE29
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yeah its a real treat when khasm gives you love. well done sis.
     
  7. sweettee29

    sweettee29 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THANKS SISTAH NEVAR YOU ALWAYS GOT PROPS FOR YA GIRL

    MUCH MUCH LOVE SWEETTEE29
     
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    sweetee:
    Very nice scribe sista. Keep it flowing

    Much luv.
     
  9. sweettee29

    sweettee29 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    4EVERLUV THANK YOU FOR YOUR STEADY SUPPORT GIRL A TRULY APPRECIATE YOU

    MUCH MUCH LOVE SWEETTEE29
     
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