Black Poetry : da farealness of da heart

you have penetrated my mind

its a lovely opportunity of you

your presence is so amazing

blazing from afar

i have never touched

yet you have penetrated my mind

i listen and honor the words of my king

i rise on the opportunity of you

my focus grows brighter

you have touched my hearts core

we have one final connection

can we burst together

as you penetrate my mind forever

written by sweettee29

 

Beautiful...I would say more but I'm tearing up. This struck a chord in me.

 

$$RICH$$ THANKS FOR THE LOVE YOU ALWAYS BESTOW UPON ME

KHASM YOU DO NOT KNOW WHAT HONOR YOU HAVE LAID ON ME FOR COMMENTING ON MY WORK THANKS

AND CHOCLATANGEL I PROMISE I WAS NOT TRYING TO BRING NO TEARS BUT THANK YOU FOR FEELING ME I AM TOUCHED THAT I TOUCHED YOU

AND OF COURSE MUCH MUCH LOVE SWEETTEE29

 

yeah its a real treat when khasm gives you love. well done sis.

 

THANKS SISTAH NEVAR YOU ALWAYS GOT PROPS FOR YA GIRL

MUCH MUCH LOVE SWEETTEE29

 

sweetee:
Very nice scribe sista. Keep it flowing

Much luv.

 

4EVERLUV THANK YOU FOR YOUR STEADY SUPPORT GIRL A TRULY APPRECIATE YOU

MUCH MUCH LOVE SWEETTEE29