Black Poetry : da farealness of da heart

[sweettee29]

you have penetrated my mind

its a lovely opportunity of you

your presence is so amazing

blazing from afar

i have never touched

yet you have penetrated my mind

i listen and honor the words of my king

i rise on the opportunity of you

my focus grows brighter

you have touched my hearts core

we have one final connection

can we burst together

as you penetrate my mind forever

written by sweettee29

 

[$$RICH$$]

penetrating deep within
mentally connecting
like sweet sunshine
yes let's burst together
one long time inside
this penetrating ride

what a sweet release

 

[Khasm13]

lovely mental excursion....

one love
khasm

 

[choclatangel]

Beautiful...I would say more but I'm tearing up. This struck a chord in me.

 

[sweettee29]

$$RICH$$ THANKS FOR THE LOVE YOU ALWAYS BESTOW UPON ME

KHASM YOU DO NOT KNOW WHAT HONOR YOU HAVE LAID ON ME FOR COMMENTING ON MY WORK THANKS

AND CHOCLATANGEL I PROMISE I WAS NOT TRYING TO BRING NO TEARS BUT THANK YOU FOR FEELING ME I AM TOUCHED THAT I TOUCHED YOU

AND OF COURSE MUCH MUCH LOVE SWEETTEE29