Black Poetry : Da Depth of my "Heart"

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    The first day I laid eyes on you
    those words spoken was true
    a love came abound
    soft touches, secret sounds

    Between them seventeen legs of years
    we found growth through pain and joy
    we visit places no one could ever know
    saw the stars the moon and sun

    Our heart bond three soul of birth
    with ties of love , rapidly sweet
    we kissed faith and hug hope
    what we shared could never be compared

    from the depth of my heart
    I loved
    I gave
    I cherish
    I believed
    I rose
    I stood strong against the odds

    now we at this place in life
    between two souls of love
    united yet untamed but change
    so now I sit and await the ending

    If only could have saw eighteen
    from the depth of my heart
    what a picture it would have painted
    for us to see on this journey

    May I just say bye!

    with blue tears.
     
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    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was nice rich enjoyed nice all through and ended well

    If only could have saw eighteen
    from the depth of my heart
    what a picture it would have painted
    for us to see on this journey

    May I just say bye!
    with blue tears.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Big thax brother for the love on this.
     
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    I enjoyed the entire poem, but I love those few words together. They inspire me to the point of wanting to write to them. Also, they are so loving and promising that its sad the poem ends with a goodbye.

    Nice work Rich!

    Coco :)
     
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    Thank you and yes please write to it ...take it and work your magical pen sistah coco
     
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