Khasm13 : da day i slayed da jolly green

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  1. Khasm13

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    as da summer day scorched
    i sat on my back porch
    and let da wind blend
    with my essence
    it felt betta then an unrepented sin
    not learned from a lesson
    buddah blessin
    left my brain with an erection
    that needed no correction
    cause i enjoyed the added perception
    must have been destined
    for me to have an interupted session...

    i noticed my beer bottle bouncing on my banaster
    and then i felt a rumble and a shake
    i was quickly rattled like a drunken janitor

    BOOM BOOM BOOM BOOM
    ..................................
    BOOM BOOM BOOM BOOM

    oh ish...what da hell is this
    coming down the steet was a green giant
    walking with authority and shaking his giant fists
    at me....
    as i thought to myself...what did i do to he
    then i remember the
    golden hydroponics i stole from the palace in da clouds
    under stealth in da night under a shroud
    i was too proud to think this act was not noticed
    when he stomped and crushed my saab
    thas when i regained focus
    he screamed out

    you little black rogue
    i make sure you pay for what you stole
    ima take your little body
    and fold
    it like the chair you was sitting in
    pesky @ss men
    always getting in
    something you cannot handle
    i think that i will use your dreds
    to thread my golden banjo
    you little durdy ho
    ima make sure you die slo...


    then he said...hold up, where did he go?

    he didn't peep that i climbed up in the tree
    i hid up in the green leaves so that he could not see
    da jolly green soon turned mean
    and started smashing things
    seen and unseen
    what he didn't know
    i also stole a magic bean
    which would turn me into anything
    i could imagine with my being
    i swollowed it, and my third eye started seeing

    hydroponic powers activate....

    shape of a thunder cloud...


    the sunny day soon turned grey
    the powers of thunder and rain were mine to obtain
    da jolly green didn't take notice
    and continued to smash the street up
    debris flying everywhere like a swarm of locust
    thas when i position myself above him
    then with natures hocus pocus
    i let him have 1.5 million volts
    of lightning...which smited the green dolt
    burned to ashes...his essence vanished like the pope
    gone with the wind
    i transformed back to myself with a grin
    5-0 rolled up late as ususal
    as the birds came back and started churping
    making the day musical
    sargent swine asked me for a statement
    thas when my look became vaccant
    cause i remembered my car

    oh my car

    dang!!!!

    let me go get some more of those magic beans
    since i just got rid of da jolly green fiend...
     
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    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    [email protected], bruh...

    Can I get down wit dat cipher?

    Is dat dat Ghostweeeeeed?

    Brothers & sisters, your guide on todays mindtrip...Brother Khasm.

    Nice.
     
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    lololol
    hahahahahahaha......
    ghostweeeeeeeeeed....*as i hear the horse hoves*
    hahahahaha....dude, that cracked me up...thanks pos
    one love
    khasm
     
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    :bowdown: brother this was tight
    mind trip is right
    i was all up in this
    flow so mo
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    Why do I get the impression that you have an awesome *comic book* collection... :coffee:

    I just sat back and enjoyed this one...talk about Fantasy Art intertwined
    with some phenomenal creative writing...WOW...you are so entertaining...
    I must also say that the beginning really captured my attention...very rarely
    is a poet able to overtly rhyme with precision and tact...Well Done...Khasm!

    I'm just like what a journey.... :crying: I don't want to get emotional...
    but I LOVE YOUR WRITING... :cry: see...I can't even get to the alter this time

    but know...your are the :bomb: :wink:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was mad off da hook i really was relaxed into this piece of art
    well created brutha ....tyte
     
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    I'm bringin my blankie can i get a PERSONALIZED story peeeesh :D lol
    Orrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr you can ummmm ya know umm gimme a peek at how u manifest those skillz of yours my king ;) :D
     
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    Yes, you know I can imagine you writing some type of epic story, hmmm...who knows? Enjoyed this.
     
  9. Khasm13

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    thanks mba...yeah my mind does trip at times...thanks my sista

    sage...yeah...i do have a nice comic book selection...it kept my *** out the streets when i was younger...your comments touch my heart everytime sage and i truly thank you for reading works from a madman...lol :)

    thanks rich...i never considered my pieces a work of art...just mind babble :lol:...thanks my brotha

    thanks trin...you know i got a secret story for you right :wink: :heart:...thanks my sista

    thanks watz...yeah, one day when i get focused, ima sit down and put something together along that line....thanks my sista

    one love
    khasm
     
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    LOL! Agreeing with everyone!
    Loved the craft displayed!
    Awesome scribe!
     
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