Black Poetry : Da Bridge Cast ya Cares

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Cast ya cares on me
    I am the bridge u see
    walk ever so gently
    u can lean on me
    i will caress ya pain
    mend da heart
    when ever trouble start
    cross me in all 4 seasons
    i am the loving reasons
    to comfort ya thoughts
    respect ya wishies
    be there when things
    seem missing
    to whisper i care
    u can find me anywhere
    deep in ya daydreams
    even when u sleep
    u will feel my meek unique
    touch i'm like da maze
    wit no end and the true
    lovin friend cast ya cares
    i fight ya battles
    i pray for thee
    u can always count on me
    i'm da bridge crossing worlds
    from da land to air
    i'm sweeter then chocolate
    humble wit grace
    the one who enter ya secret place
    i'm the sunshine in ya smile
    the gentle breeze caressin ya face
    the lovin handz dat trace
    i'm the arms to hold u right
    protect u from nasty sights
    i'm the bridge of miles
    when u feel no hope
    weak and mistreated
    lean on me for affection
    call my name
    surely i'll claim
    take u up cuddle u like a dove
    give my warmth and humble hugs
    untouched kisses u will taste
    before u leave my space
    so go head walk on me
    so u feel da depth of thee
    I am da bridge of cares :deal:
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sweetly laid loving the flava of this poem
    nice vibe...another for the wall indeed....
    Peace..lovin ya style
    Angel
     
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    cast ya cares on me Angel
    forth i am the bridge of hope
    the walk to love and the song to sing
    come closer and feel my whisper wind
    and the touch of my caressin comfort
    come deeper so u can taste the ripple
    of my heart and know dis love real
    this gentle tender warmth is shared
    come cast ya fears as i taketh da tears
    rip all pain and mend what's broken
    dis da bridge of sweet emotions
    come within and da depth of a bridge
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    To truly be that bridge for someone, must be so special to behold, and cross over. Liked the creative concept here, nicely flowed.
     
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    aaaaaaawwwwwwwwww
    this is SUCH a sweet drop! you are most def that bridge, sweets. and hey, if you lived closer I'd come over and get a hug from ya. :D
     
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    :blush: oh boy.....
     
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    this has a very comforting flow, easily makes a lady feel pretty special.
     
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    watz indeed the specialty of wholesome
    is the bridge to cross where comfort lay
    forth the ear to listen intently and the
    caressin arms to hold cast ya cares on me....
    thanks sistah

    gempis u already did with words that journey deep into my heart
    holding me as i hold u in comfort so cast ya cares on me
    lean on me i am the bridge strong and bold i don't fold nor break
    withstand all weather i take and spray love and hope lean on me
    thankz sistah

    indeed Angel indeed the bridge of tomorrow
    again thankz

    Phenomenal special hearts require sweet attention
    so on the bridge of comfort is where one should be
    cast all cares on me as i soak up the pain caress da
    tears and mend the broken and wit grace lean on me
    thankz sistah

    I'm always here always ready just walk cross the bridge
    of my heart and cast ya troubles forth i am the arms
    of all four seasons i'll stand listen and comfort
    lean on me any hour , day or week .....
     
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    Aw this was so sweet and tender a bridge...never heard it compared to that lovin' this drop Rich"high five":lol::wink::wave:
     
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    true love and grace of a heart
    is untouchable it come many ways
    unheard of or seen Thank u sistah
    for all cares can be cast on the bridge
    the amount of pain and broken promises
    it holds will never get old it's real........
    peace sistah poetess
     
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