Black Poetry : Da break down of L.

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Soft kiss
    warm embrace
    magical touch
    lovin arms dat
    means so much
    a heart of warmth
    a mind instill
    a soul of grace
    what a sweet feel
    we hit paths of
    rocky uncertain
    detours that sometime
    lead us astray
    making motions set
    to play but O' there
    is comforting & sharing
    feelings and hope
    controlling the moment
    of emotions with showered
    happiness it's like a new
    garden in da prairie with
    faith and respect
    love is wonderful feeling
    of peace & joy , contentment
    love brings out the best in a
    person heart to reach for a star
    when you are in love theirs no
    limits to what can be done
    as the heart opens up u share
    all the fruits of life & explore
    together as one soulmate
    real love take u on heights
    u never felt before or thought
    possible and to fine sorry isn't
    part of your vocabulary structure
    nor fussing , cussing & fighting
    it's not a struggle for power
    or gain full control but love is
    togetherness in harmony as gold
    love is a relationship where two
    hearts meet join as one softly
    and sweet the most important
    part of love is when two people
    can't be pulled apart by no means
    of foolishness ,
    love is honesty and trust
    love is what make it a us
    love is stable and free
    love is inner humble beauty
    like da bird in the sky
    flappin wings we call a dove
    regardless of many flawz
    perfect love , real love
    is in it's existence of our
    mind,our heart deep in the soul
    powerful love live inside the
    pain of many broken paths
    when we astray or commit
    yet hold commitment with honor
    love great power stand . :love:

    if you really love and know love
    feel love and want love but the
    unknown answer still remain. :crying:

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  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very nice and warm scribe really enjoyed this
    Love is what you make it and believe within ones
    heart holds the real truth of what love is to them
    very nice scribe of what love is but yet it goes deeper
    and alot unanswered still remains within the emotion
    and meaning...hmmm i think ya breaking it down.....Angel
     
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    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    you broke it down...and the end..with that blue face...
    hopefully we all can know that bliss, that vulnerability
    always sad if you cant/dont
    nice flow rich
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes indeed angel the break down can be the true reality of it all
    mostly unanswered in the mind not knowing...........................
    thanks for the words & thoughts

    deepy sometime eyes can miss da true bliss due to foolishness
    yet want and feel da love still unanswered ya right even if u don't/won't
    thankz for the words here
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    if only one could know da real affects it would be
    more easy to understand
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    now i have to agree with you on dat....much much love on this scribe
    i hear and feel your words....speak on.... :spinstar:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    word !!!! up in motion above
     
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    Oh $$RICH$$... U broke it down on what
    it means to truly be in love..not in like
    I 'm just lovin' this.
     
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    thankz sweet baby face for da peep inside dis tale of tides of loving
     
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    ohhhh myyyyy, you just wrote the book on love, sweetheart. Love the depth and flava of this here.
     
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