Black Poetry : Da black and white disorder

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Caressed deep inside my blackness
    of night covering me in the friendly
    secret it knows as i seek blackness

    from the white glar of light da radiant
    of shine and moon struck of my deep
    fears showing the natural mixture of
    da two black and white

    Now how many live in life of muti shade
    from the struggling depression of oppression
    trying to exist in the reality of da world of
    muted blue and sour red clashing in the depth
    of black and white is like quicksand of tymes
    when everything drop da reflection of some
    distorted myth we crawl and claw ways to da
    farest heights of our ability to bury all dreams
    in the fears and sour note of our mission we
    stand commonly and whoaaaa!!
    in the hypocrisy of humility

    O' how i arch and lone in the mission
    for the dark soft long black darkness
    of my dead mother's womb
    from the white tales in light of destruction
    the myth of sleeping hollow i sparrow out
    in the distance not to be brave, nor reason
    but stand strong for the people of my creed
    by the deed of our forefather's and journey
    invisible inside the hidden tomb that's secretly
    away beyond da brinks of sanity for the taste
    of reality and clean myself of guilt that takes my
    breath like da deep abyss of death that hurl me
    in da light of white eyes but i know the spot
    inside my black soul of darkness that caress me
    into a deep slumber inside my chambers
    :happens:
     
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    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :ref: Flag on the play because Rich had to be offsides to write such a off the chain drop! :teach: LOL
    Felt u on here my brother!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    [email protected] man the off sides and i was going for a first
    thankz my brutha indeed coz this run will win the far game !
     
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    :jawdrop: this was tight love this part of you :kiss2:

    just twisted tight!!!! mental crusher yes!!!!

    peace
    angel
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    thank my sista just trying to bring it in a different way
     
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    black & white
    color of mix blend
    to a shade of Grey
    and looms heavy
    between two
    but inside my darkness
    is comfort and unto
    light lay fear of
    white destruction
    put on depression
     
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    I particularly like this flow because I could see 2 messages within. One message speaking of the oppression of our people even to this day, and striving to continue even though we are weary. The other, I see how the grip of depression can take hold, making you want to seek the comfort of mother's womb to escape the madness, yet somehow, you continue to rise above it all. Anywho, I loved the concept and how it was brought brotha poet.
     
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    Thankz watz u see it so well
    and feel the depth of the mind
    as it was captured between da
    black & white disorder.
     
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    much love and peace dear brother
    you touch deep within the poet heart
    your script pulse the sorrow
    deep from within
    feeling you on this

    Blue
     
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    thankz sista blue happy u felt the depth of my mission
    and the reason of disorder black & white
     
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