Black Poetry : Da * Bite * Of * Love *

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    captivated twist
    love unknown
    erotic ly
    da bite was made
    a perfect kiss
    to the gentle spot

    a cold sweat runs
    from da cheeks
    heated fear
    compassionate
    juices run like da river
    a small grin made
    fading back lights dem
    slow ly take in under
    the rapture of da bite
    da love smooth ly
    laid
    moans made
    silent cries and oil tears
    not heard or seen
    deep ly embracing
    nails clutching clawing
    romance of affectional
    bliss

    as the bite took control
    and unleased a feverish
    journey where only
    da heart remains

    mesmerized
    the sting of
    a bite has da body numb

    lying still
    in da flicker of light all was notice
    was the licking of the lips
    tongue swaying around

    a few whispers heard soft ly
    yet can remember what was
    said blanked out.................

    and da continue bite of pt #2 (Da Final Bite)
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THE COUNT

    Da * Bite * Of * Love * #1 be all of dat
    Felt so good... we're comin' back

    1poetsought ~
     
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    as i await pt.2......
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    da bite 2 continues

    Thanks 1poet & j'h
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    have u ever been hit by da bite ???
    i tell u it wooooweeee pt.#2 next
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    da bite was a
    motional bliss
    in da night
    a gentle nibble
    that made it right
    ummmmm!
    da biteeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!
     
  7. Sierra

    Sierra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi Rich, ;)

    I am waitng with anticipation for part 2!! :hot: :flame:

    I'll wait
    but please
    don't be too late.
    I am using all my might
    to battle this inner fight
    to read part 2
    of da bite!!

    Great :read: Rich!!

    ~Sierra~:heart:
     
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    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ****.............YES i'm anticipating part 2.....
     
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    PlayWitItPimp05 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh my goodness...

    "da love smoothly laid...
    moans made
    silent cries and oil tears
    not heard or seen...."

    OH YEAH!!!!

    I think you know what I'm feelin...

    :heart: :heart: PLAY :heart: :heart:
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wo wow wowowowowowo..:blush: who ever know that a bite could feel soo good???? I'm sittin down for pt 2 :)
     
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