Khasm13 : da bedtime story....

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  1. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    time for bed lil johnny
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    where's my mommy
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    out to eat with your papi
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    uncle tell me a story
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    ok, i'll tell you about how da dred dakis almost got me....
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    dred d-a-k-i-s?....says lil johnny


    In the early 1700's when america was being pillaged
    lived a peaceful indian tribe in a small village
    when all of a sudden
    paleface rode in on black horses
    with lightning sticks dispense'n out blood spillage
    women and children felt da blast
    from buckshot shotguns in mass
    tribesmen were strung up
    and after everyone was dead
    then invaders threw their guns up
    in da air
    but the foolish men were not aware
    of the old shaaman in da back
    who saw the whole attak
    on his way back
    from gather'n herbs
    now looking
    he see's scavage'n birds
    rip'n da flesh
    from underneath his daughters
    buffalo-skinned dress
    a salty tear falls from his eyes
    as he runs into the woods
    and hides....

    swear'n vengance
    he promises his dead daughter
    that hell will be the sentence
    for the men involved
    and their seeds will be disolved
    like sugar in water
    he prayed for the paleface's slaughter
    and with mystic magic
    his wish was granted
    he payed this price with his life
    and the lives of the paleriders turned tragic....

    da conjured demon dred dakis
    has the blackest
    of all hearts
    the hatred of man
    fuels this beast
    everytime he rips apart
    da paleriders body parts
    each year on da day of da massacre
    one rider dies
    and anyone else da demon sees
    with his devilish eyes
    da children of these men are cursed
    to die in da worst
    way
    and that leads me up until today....

    i was hang'n out with one of my friends
    who was one of the paleriders
    children's children's children's children's children's children
    out on a camp'n trip
    we went one weekend
    in the late night hours i had a sip
    of red wine...chill'n
    when my friend ran back to da cabin
    with a busted lip...and blood spill'n
    "the moster my granddad tole me about is here
    we got to get out of here
    r-i-g-h-t n-o-w"
    jus then the dred dakis blasted through
    the wall like a giant motorized plow
    all 6 of us scattered
    as the decendent got battered
    blood splattered the ground
    as da demon looked around for some freebies
    thas when i climed up the chimney
    so he could not see me
    and hopefully not get me
    for the next 5 minutes i heard horrific screams
    guts hit'n the ground, broken bones make'n a crack'n sound
    that night still plauges my dreams
    and now it will plauge yours
    in your subconcious coridors....

    good night lil johnny....
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hmmmmmm..speechless 4 now but i be back
     
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    ok dayum poet...
    your mind in ova time
    this was unique love your style
     
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    How could you tell a bedtime story like that to a child?
     
  5. Khasm13

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    the same reason our ancestors
    told the children stories of enslavement
    brutal beatings and killings...

    so that a child can see right from wrong...
    so that a child can see the truth...
    so that a child will be scared all night....lol

    my aunt told me this bedtime story about a
    headless man when i was 9 years old...
    it scared da dickens out of me...
    now, not to much really scares me...

    this is poetry people...
    i did not really tell my nephew this...
    relax....release...relate...:)
    peace
    khasm
     
  6. Khasm13

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    my bust chups...
    i see you're from london...
    and your perspective on things are totally different...
    don't pay attention too the first part of that reply
    peace
    khasm
     
  7. Khasm13

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    thanks mzblk...
    i see you were not taken aback
    by this piece of literary work....
    peace
    khasm
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dis was it u took it to the landz to be known
    speak on tell da story so all may hear
     
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    Nice Halloween tribute, my brothah. ;) You are such a creative soul, I love it.
     
  10. Khasm13

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    thanks ola...
    i didn't mean no harm...:)

    rich...i'm just trying to keep coming
    with different stuff dude...thanks brah

    gempis....it's dat time of the year...
    i despise the reasons that we celebrate a holiday like this
    but the kids like it...thanks for the love gurl
    peace
    khasm
     
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