Black Poetry : Da Awaking......

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The river runs slow..
    As the sun prepare to rise…
    You can hear the
    waterfalls in the back..
    As the birds begin
    to sing….
    And the scent of us in the air
    As the wind blows
    from the window……..
    morning light
    shines so bright..
    Up over the horizon
    A rainbow forms…..
    so bold and pretty
    As our souls begin to fly…
    the morning after..
    you hold me in your arms..
    as the tears of joy
    start to run again
    you wipe them with a kiss
    catching each one….
    the echo of
    our hearts beat in a
    romantic tone
    as the flame begins to burn
    once more..

    a blkangel thang....2004
     
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    wonderful flow..
    a new day indeed
    shines bright here
    lovely
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    it's always beautiful
    when the new day
    shine from above
    and the wings flap
    as the grace flow in
    this was awesome tyte drop
     
  4. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Blue thank you for your reply.....

    Rich yes indeed thanks

    thank both of you for the
    love and support
    it means so much
    peace
    Angel
     
  5. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    don't we sometimes wish...being in heaven...lasts forever? to feel that kind of love is a wonderful thing...to have and to hold...that was beautiful
     
  6. Mawelulu1Luv

    Mawelulu1Luv Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ooooooo tha soothing sweet soft song of a true luv...
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    queentswana
    Mawelulu1Luv

    thank you both for your time in reading and postin
    Peace
    Angel
     
  8. deepy

    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    twas nice...
    open...lyrical..
    thanks...
     
  9. Khasm13

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    nice to wake up to something like that
    fa sho...liked ya flo
    one love
    khasm
     
  10. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This awaking sounds very romantic, serene flow.