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Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by $$RICH$$, Jan 31, 2005.

  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Ancient artists carvings
    of canvas and stone
    spirals slabs telling

    the sun dagger secrets
    i lie alone in separation
    again consumed by silence

    melodies painted encircle
    through the mindful vision
    as it multiplies into creation
    the art cries at dawn
    memory at dusk as it manifest
    an solitude maze

    promise renew'd memories
    parade around the finger tips
    in a symbolism of unknown
    that saturate my mind
    to that very moment life
    of poetry was born
    as my pen & pad made love
    i knew it was tyme.

    Poeticly spread from the Nu ~ wave creation
    2005 $R
     
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    Lovin this, $$RICH$$. I too contemplate ancient times past, and how things begun. You laid this down beautifully.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    thankz my beloved sista for the visit and u can feel the mental depth
     
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    From primative carvings to the sophistication of Richie Rich ~
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    big ups 1poet thankz bruh for the visit...
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    As the writers used to etch in stone, this takes us back to that time, as we put pen to paper. Taking our thoughts back to days of yore. Flow on brotha.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    so true sista thankz for the love on this piece.
     
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    feeling you again RICH! you laying the scribes, blowing of the dust from ancient tides, and i'm soaking it all in..........this is a true work of art brotha, keep em coming, i'm listening and waiting for more, once again, a great scribe, for a great poet............one love
     
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    humble thank you lilcherry76 for the visit and love poeticly sis
    happy u can feel the motion in depth !
     
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    now this was it right here how you craft this in just the right way took the reader from past to present of your gift which is one i can read all day thank you for sharing your gift as you do...Angel
     
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