Khasm13 : da abysmal hole in my soul...

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  1. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    yesterday i could have swore i was ok
    but then i woke up today
    and something just doesn't feel right
    falling from an astounding height
    can turn the strong into hypes
    what could have blinded your minds sight
    to run with the wild animals at night
    the chill and the frost
    has a nasty bite
    i see it now in your eyes
    i didn't think you was that type
    of guy
    the one to lie
    and act sly
    why
    did you do it
    cause once you start
    it's hard to not persue it
    somewhere deep down i guess i knew it
    so here in this dark world i sit
    thinking that you might have blew it
    remember all the times we had
    listening to different types of music
    so much going on
    i feel like i might lose it
    why did you choose to hang with that white ho
    didn't i tell you that her bony hands
    neva lets go
    with each bl0w-j0b
    she turn your soul old
    cause her heart is cold
    put on this earth
    to help black folks fold
    [email protected] man...
    me and you
    you and me
    been through everything
    and ima help you through this
    but what da f%ck was you thinking about
    what da hell did i miss?












    what da hell did i miss?
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you didnt miss anything..
    this is the path he took
    and got hook..you didnt slack
    because he choose to be wack
    drugs is a bad mutha....
    but i know how ya feel
    my best friend been clean now
    for 6 years...
    deep piece much love :angel1:
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    No dog smells its own do, dawg! You straight!
     
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    when viewed in the greater sense, as the more conscious among us always do, what you're speakin on has led to the downfall of our peoples for hundreds if not thousands of years. and if god truly is love, does it even matter if we don't understand the depths of what love truly is, since we all contain the seed of the divinity within? the motion of the moment captures our attention at all points, while eternity continues its intractable movement...you captured one such moment with this gem. write on, poet.
     
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    I def feel u on this hea khaz...
    thangs seem ta change but make sure they change for tha betta....and sometimes,somewhere along tha line you'll find that some things change,whether u like it or not,that you have to let be....
    ya man'll come around dawg.....just maintain ur position,and be that friend he come around to.......dope piece...i been thru it too...trust me.....


    one love !
     
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    u all good
    heard ya on dis
     
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    the black mans kryptonite...

    as Prince would say...."Controversy"
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you seen the signs
    you told what you saw
    you did what you could
    you did not miss nothing
    that is all anyone can do
    you are a friend..
    much love and many blessing
    Peace
     
  9. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you missed a lot my brotha
    confidant and friend
    we knew each other from the beginning
    and here I am rushing to the end
    and trying to pretend
    that I can survive
    reaching to strive
    and living a lie
    wanting to tell you
    fearful of ya affected view
    because close as we are
    at the end of the day
    I was me and you were who u are
    somewhere along the affliction and anxiety
    of livin this life in this society
    I took a wrong turn
    and from that spark I started to burn
    and at the same time yearn
    for some clarity
    blinded by my own stupidity
    burning inside
    burdened by my pride
    I'm straining my brotha and I dont know how I got here
    a prisoner of my fear
    nothing left to say
    no where left to turn
    everytime I try
    another bridge I burn
    trapped in a spiral
    draining me of my control
    losin my mind while strainin' to keep my soul
    me and you
    you and me
    we been through it all
    but I walk my road
    and you walk yours
    and I now I hope I can count on you
    to help me straighten out my detours
     
  10. Khasm13

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    thanks mzblk...i hope he can bounce back from this...

    thanks 1poet...i appreciate dat...word

    thanks alter...i wish this moment that i captured was fiction like a lot of my other poems...but unfortunately this is as non as non-fiction can get...i hope to see you around more brah...

    thanks lurk...thas some good advice right there...i hope he does come around...my boy doesn't even know i know...thas what makes this situation so bad...thanks again dawg

    thanks rich for da love...

    thanks ola for check'n me out...

    kryptonite is nothing compared to crack rock...you'll die from kryptonite but a crack rock will make hell on earth a reality...thanks angeli...you always see da deeper meaning behind things...and i love ya soul for dat gurl...

    thanks blue...i feel like i have missed something because i haven't been hanging around him like i use to...he hasn't been hanging around me like he use to...whas a grown man to do?

    triniti...thank you so much for dat :heart:

    dude...
    you could have told me
    and you still can
    you don't have to explain your thought process
    cause i'm ya man
    use to be your boy
    i'm on your side
    not a cat with evil ploys
    i remember all the shared joys
    that we had
    now hear'n this info from your dad
    has me in a bad place
    feel'n sad
    come to me
    and tell me
    da deal
    i got your back
    no matta how good
    that white ho makes you feel
    this is so f*cked up
    i can't even express
    the levels of my duress
    the Lord has many tests
    that we must go through
    one for me
    and one for you...
    i need for you to trust me
    like you use to....





    peace
    khasm
     
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