Quiet Poetry Lounge : Déjà Vu

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by HODEE, Apr 13, 2008.

  1. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I enjoy watching you.

    I lay on the bed as you prepare to bathe
    Visually I take you in

    You have this habit
    Of sticking your toes
    Into the water
    The water is always too hot

    I close my eyes
    You settle into the tub
    And make noises
    You make this low moan
    The sounds… ummmm

    I look forward to you coming in
    Just before you reach
    Over me to get the powder
    I move your powder on purpose
    So you have to lean over me
    I kiss what ever part of you
    That comes near my lips

    Before you get dressed
    You lotion your legs and arms
    You smell great
    You turn me on

    I sit up and take you in
    As you are getting dressed

    You do things that spin me
    You slip into a dress
    And as it falls across your hips
    You caress it into place
    That dress falls
    Into curves that drive me.

    I’ve been here before
    I will always come back for more.
    Forever more
    I keep coming back for more of you

    Déjà Vu

    Coming back to you
    Maybe this time I can stay
    :heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    somehow i know this Deja vu thing so well that keeps me coming back
    is it the smell the taste the look or feel whatever it is , wheww Deja vu.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Those sweet moments that lure you back for a wonderful replay. Your pen painted a perfect picture of this Hodee.
     
  4. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I like this picture you have painted before my eyes flo on Hodee1
     
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