Black Poetry : Cyclical *****

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by N2urSoul, Feb 7, 2002.

  1. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    So
    maybe
    you could ***** me
    one more time
    ........................................... hmmm? How 'bout it?
    Stir up the pain that has settled in
    the shallow waters of angst
    then perhaps
    you could
    ~ lie ~
    to me ...
    I'm well acquainted with that
    and you know how I seek
    comfort in familiarity
    then you could
    ~ tell me you're sorry ~
    that's always amusing
    and of course
    you would then leave
    which would be a fitting end
    to the aforementioned

    ~ I could be sad ~

    you ~ remorseful ~

    and then, perhaps
    we could get together
    in the near future and
    do this all over again
    and again
    and
    again





    (c) FINDING SO(u)LUTIONS
     
  2. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you know, there's a certain comfort in "familiar"... we condition ourselves to squeeze every ounce of gratification during these encounters... knowing that as the pendulum swings out and away, it will return.... in another few ... and we'll do it all again, the same way.

    ...yeah, there's a certain sick comfort in cyclical ********... ain't no surprises...except in that nanosecond when after the last 50-11th umpteen time, we thought it might be different this time... (and the tape auto stops and rewinds) can somebody say, "***** me" please?

    enjoyed this, Ms. Soul

    a
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    N2......i don't know how u do it but u do and
    sistah it's on hit ......love reading u can't wait
    to hear da voice behind all dis
     
  4. hi-wa

    hi-wa Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    n2,
    u just keep banging the charts with
    your ironically true flo's. your pieces truly
    show the strength of your art.
    thanx.

    hw
     
  5. Bishop

    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I would rather make love to you
    mend the broken heart
    that was caused by another
    help you to forget the pain that was stirred up
    and be true to you
    in word and deed
    let me make love to you
    and ease your mind
    never neglect the treasure that I know you to be
    he may have phucked you
    but I want to make love to you
     
  6. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    N2urSoul,

    i second everything stated.
    yo how tyte can you get?!?
     
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    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    N2...

    Lady U R bad!!!!!

    Bad meaning good - but I 'spect ya knew that!!! :wink:

    :love:
    GQ
     
  8. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sustah A :)

    I couldn't have said this better myself.... ya' took da words right outta my mouff! :D

    Thanks for always readin' & vibin' wit your sistah N2!!


    Always :heart:
     
  9. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hi-wa

    You really know how 2 make a sistah :D

    Thank you back!!

    N2
     
  10. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Bishop ~ you got me Sizzlin' off of your response which is too :hot: hot to handle! :angel1:

    Luv ya' doll face! :kiss: Thank you!!

    N2
     
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