Black Poetry : Cutting for Nothing

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  1. BlatinaPoet4u

    BlatinaPoet4u Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    *~ I wrote this poem after talking to one of my friends who has a cutting addicition, so it inspired me to write a poem for her point of view (here's her story)~*


    i sit here and watch you lay with him and cuddle
    you hold him or he holds you, either way you snuggle
    i say i need to go for a walk but you tell me to write
    and there is curfew and i can't be walking around in the middle of the night
    so here i am and i can't explain
    thinking is the only thing i can do to deal with the pain
    i need to cut so bad right now but i'm testing my self control
    the scissors are right here all i need to do is open them and let go
    the broken shards of my past are coming together again
    looking at those pictures really took it's toll, i remember more and more of back then
    as the past becomes clear again i'm afraid the present will fade.
    that the past might take over and take away the new life i've made
    as i see it there is a line between my past and present and i left the past in the dark
    but i feel like it is finding a light to come back, to leave another mark
    i am still here with you and i plan to stay
    you still know my name, and you've told me everything will be okay
    you wanted me to hang out and do stuff
    but i feel like i'm not good enough to have a friend like you, just not good enough
    i'm afraid that you will forget about me but that fear is slowly going away
    and i'm finally starting to believe that you might stay
    i wish i could be that happy little kid in the pictures again
    but things will never be the same with no worries like back then.
    so i sit here thinking about the unexplainable and wonder
    and the thoughts take over and pound like thunder!!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    i like dis how you created this beauty
    tyte drop
     
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    wow.....wow....wow.....not only do u have skills,but ya reasoning and mentals is on point....keep flowin,put us on....
     
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