Black Poetry : cutting edge

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Double edge sword
    cutting at the body
    of hope trying to
    assassinate the structure
    the full existance of beings
    the rejection of feelings
    where the myth lay heavy
    but from the hills i saw
    light in the northen straz
    inside the quiet beauty
    the colorless shade ova cast
    the reasons as i slumber
    into the memories of yesteryear
    u come in the shadows of
    goodness yet the art of the
    devil the killing evil demon
    to set fire upon the harvest
    of sweet fruits & berries
    outside i hear the desperately
    plead in the endless spand
    i stand wit outstretched
    reaching handz & arm to console
    comfort and bring faith to the
    glassy eyes of salty tears dat run
    ova a bedded river u come in the
    shape of a rattle snake but i've
    made preparation without frustration
    me wants to scream badly
    not for me but u , coz the marks
    of the cutting edge has lash ya back
    and twisted ya tongue of speech
    i rumble in the corner stone of resons
    and open my face to eternity
    the duel between two is common
    but to fight self as one is out right
    crazy and the battle will never be
    done but make the struggle worse
    by the cutting edge ........... :eek:hmy:
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very interesting piece....
    releasin my thoughts
    in your writting nice drop
    feelin it
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was da deepness
    of a hollow soul seeking
    whom the wrongdoer
    i shall not rest til it's won
    by reasons and faith
    a clash of handz & mind
    crossing into a battle
    which hunt me .

    Peace & luv
     
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    aqueenpassing Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Feeling Ya!

    $$Rich$$$
    As always I am feeling your flow, I am always amazed at how you put it down
    Interesting and something to leave you thinking......

    Keep expressing yourself and keeping it real

    Queen
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    the calling
    feeling revolution shout clear in this drop
    arms raise my dear brother
    i am no longer under cover
    much love
    Peace~N~Love
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Thankz aqueenpassing ya words mean a lot to me

    hey sistah bluewater happy to know ya uncovered and back
    indeed thankz
     
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