Black Poetry : Cut

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by caramelpython, Jan 2, 2010.

  1. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I made 2 many moves in a world without motion
    Left equations type abrasions on rough skin that needed lotion
    All the right moves within a land that was left
    Holding my lips tightly like I’m in a packed room with morning breath
    What’s left is so foul not even Jordan could have scored on his hottest night
    Eyes closed tightly from the glares from my futures light
    But I don’t wear shades I just open my eyes to the rays
    I'm stealing other peoples shine I am being told now days
    Most of my thoughts I never took time to write out
    I just kept the pen move'n on some mental white out
    My style has no aroma
    It’s blind between the lines like its poetic Glaucoma
    Hard between verses like morning wood
    Gutter at time so I'm so hood
    I write through my pain I write through my joy
    I write the tales of a man looking at the plights of a little boy
    I slide like my name does
    I fall like the rain does
    Who saw me in the dark and then brought the light to my cause
    Who pulled me up on some old sh*t like I pull up my draws?
    I rebel against some laws...
    Well so I was informed
    I just say I drum to the beat of the darkest storms
    I write in swarms,
    different textures different forms
    Different times of the day and 2 times in a leap year
    So I'm just going to end this flow like a porn..
    So I'm going to just skeet here!

    CUT!
     
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    Clyde C Coger Jr going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    In the Spirit of Sankofa and Truth!

    Very smooth caramelpython, in the Cut...The flow takes you into reading it through...Peace In my brother friend.

     
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    Well, well, well ...A big welcome back brother, it's so very good to see you back home!! you've been missed.
    I see ya came back and picked up where you lest off ...bringing the house down!!
    tight piece poet, wonderful drop ...and once again,
    WELCOME HOME!!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whewwwww tyte joint and good think it Cut so i was out the way of da skeet)))))

    Great to be reading you again brutha welcome back home man !!!!
     
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    awww now da snake is in the house....thought you never got the message to get ya tail home ! lol:court: I had to

    anywhos....the cut hmmm your pen slide just like you
    smooth and easy love reading you. :toast:

    Maybe I grow up one day and write again...

    Peace of Angel
     
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    In the Spirit of Sankofa and Truth!




    That's right MzBlkAngel2, get on him:)(the caramelpython)...Cause we been trying to have this Homecoming too long:

    http://destee.com/forums/showthread.php?t=61058

    There's a link within the thread, maybe it will happen...Peace In my Friends, for real!


     
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    caramelpython:
    Like the way you "Cut".
    Always a pleasure to read you.

    Much Luv & Peace,

    ~4EVER
     
  8. Ikoro

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    Two lasts lines were nice, bro. But the whole piece was flowing, articulate too.

    CUT!

    One,

    - Ikoro
     
  9. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    felt the flow poet......and um not trying to resurrect the dead but um you still got it cumming on the piece you written to me Mr. lotion!
     
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    hmmmm...

    swarms huh lol
    One things for sure brotha cp you still talk steady smack lol
    fun read indeed
    :read: :)