Black Poetry : Curve

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  1. Onichika

    Onichika Active Member MEMBER

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    Curve

    Self inflicted wounds while stabbing for perfection,
    Reflection bears witness to numerous gashes,
    Droplets of rain descend without comparison,
    Leaving the soil penetrated and malleable,
    Everest was conquered by men,
    A mind’s pedestal has no slope to begin,
    Poisonous entangled veins must be chopped at the root,
    Growth is continuous seeking to suffocate the earth,
    Dark water in surplus surrounds and nourishes,
    Flourishing branches of despair and malice,
    Unblazed trails lead out of the forest,
    Lost hysteria leads to death in abundance,
    Outside playing on an empty stomach,
    Stumbling over the same potholes in the road,
    My balance has surpassed my last dance,
    While opportunity and time continue to meet,
    It’s unfathomable why sometimes I pass.





     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow............this had my mind on a dance love the flow here
     
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    Hi Onichika
    Gosh
    we all do search for perfection
    But who can define what that can be
    I like your flow Curves, it is our life'
    journey it seems, walking a straight line
    and then now and then we got to curve
    our direction
    very interesting flow poet
    I see and feel so much from this drop
    Peace
     
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    Two thumbs up,poet.
     
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    Your words flowed every which way but loose, wonderful concept, posed oh so well. Props to ya poet.
     
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