Black Poetry : Curse Words (the beginning)

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  1. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    she thought about what she said...
    the words that came flying out of her mouth
    shocked her at first,
    making her skin crawl
    and her mouth twitch with laughter
    (laughter? :eek:hmy: )

    when she turned around she was shocked
    to see the one the curse words circled around
    to be smiling...
    (that **** dazzleing smile she hated so much the one where all the teeth look like pieces of menacing sun, threatening to burn her, a sinful sneer only reserved for those that this woman obviously knew she had in the palm of her hand...)

    she seemed cool, collected
    and whole, not caring,
    "oh so ima ***** huh"
    (in some wayz yes, but we all have a little ***** in us)

    when she shut the door in that class room
    cutting off my circulation to the outside world
    she almost seemed to laugh at what i said...
    (this thought smacked me in the face)

    she wondered what to think when
    life seemed to do grab u in such a way....
    but the curse words still flowed
    (though in more of a delicate form)
    from her mouth...
    (i guess u can't stop what is sub-conscious)

    to be continued....
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I've always said if you have to curse...
    then you lack the capacity to express yourself...
    but I must say...
    this made me think...and chuckle
    because there is much to learn from this piece
    I've learned that with the right words...
    (not curse words) you can either...uplift
    or totally...annihilate someone...
    I personally...would rather do it articulately... :read:

    Nice peace
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sometimes curse words have a way of becoming a little too common place, but yes, I've been known to sprinkle one here and there. I know what you're saying though, sometimes they seem to come out of no where. Interesting write.
     
  4. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the love yall...
    :heart:
    -story
     
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    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hmmm

    Curse words........now you got me wondering about pt. II....QQ
     
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    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i already made it, feel free to check out pt.2...
    :heart:
    -story
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    did you forget the digits?
     
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    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Curse words? Um, has a nice ring to it. Is this true? At any rate, this was fire though. I was feeling it.
     
  9. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lol yes this just recently happened to me...glad u feelin it...
    :heart:
    -story
     
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