Black Poetry : Curse Words Pt.2 (Understanding Nothing)

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  1. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    she was flung into this place where speaking the
    quietly articulated obsenities that bombarded out of her mouth
    was a common-placed as sun light on the cracked
    ground of a redemed sinner...

    they were vague, unmoved,
    and sub-consciously used
    from the cracks of her brain,
    (though some thought she did it for the admiration of others)

    Some thought the way she moved and talked
    and grew, seemed almost blessed by god...
    (Was she an angel?)
    but they couldn't comprehend though,
    why she was the way she was was a mystery to herself
    only she could find out what was up....

    Cloud 9, Paradise, Hades, and Hell
    all seemed as far from her as sleep was
    to a crazy chronic insomnia
    salivating from lack of sleep...

    Still the listless names they called her
    over..
    and over..
    and over...

    caused her to speak from the heard
    (or was she just caged in the sun's light to burn, not knowing how to get out?)

    the only place to find refuge was in anothers arms...
    so this "Ugly" gurl could become "Beautiful" again....
    maybe some day she would suceed...
     
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    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hmmmmm...again

    the only place to find refuge was in anothers arms...
    so this "Ugly" gurl could become "Beautiful" again....
    maybe some day she would suceed...


    If she would learn to find beauty in herself, then she would know she IS beauty...and always WAS beauty!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    beauty is within self is just need to know that and
    surely all the joys will come out
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Looking for love in all the wrong places, will cause one to eventually lose touch with reality....I hear what youre saying, not necessarily saying that this is the right way, just the only way for some to shine. Keep writing, poet.
     
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    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the love fambly...
    :heart:
    -story
     
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    Yes indeed, beauty is within self. But for some it takes a long time for one to find the beauty within. This was tyte story. I was definitely feeling it. It was most definitely deep and out there. Nice vibez flow from it. Keep doin' ya thing ma.
     
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    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    alwayz doin my thang foxi, and i will continue doin it...
    :heart:
    -story
     
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