Black Poetry : Currently Untitled

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Ikoro, Sep 8, 2006.

  1. Ikoro

    Ikoro Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    (Writing this was a trip, tried to not get dirty, as it is not usually my style. Just a memory, or a longing.)

    Girl...

    I'll take it there
    On any given sunday or monday.

    But consider yourself warned,
    That's the day you'll be "properly-done" day.

    So come to me
    But realize you travellin' a one way.

    You can be shy,
    You can say what u wan'say.

    Buy your body is cleary tryin'
    To sexpress that it wants mey (me).

    You'll have to close your eyes in pure delight,
    Because I shine as bright as a sun-ray!

    I don't usually play games,
    But whenever you want - you can come play.

    :blush:

    ~Ikoro
     
  2. 4EVERLUV

    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ikoro, I liked your flo, so I thought I would join you
    hope you don't mind.:)


    Boy….
    I’ll meet you there
    Pick your day of the week

    My body wont discriminate when it s time to seek
    You…… and ignite your fiyah with my flames

    I might be “properly-done”
    But you will be insane from exstasy untamed

    Look into my eyes….nothin' about me is shy
    Im ready to travel your friendly skies

    You think my body wants you….
    Then stop stalling and come shine
    Your sun ray upon my garden
    and lets see what grows
    Me or you…

    I like to play games
    when I can make the rules

    I have one in mind
    Let me know if you want to play too.
     
  3. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Surely ya get 3 claps:great:...for going there,
    For taking us where we long to be
    Providing the love that we divinly seek
    The kind that makes us humble and weak

    The kind of love that chills to the core...
    The kind that keeps us coming for more!
    so yeah, ...take us there.
     
  4. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    look out now taken it there...........
     
  5. Ikoro

    Ikoro Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Mmh...

    I'm glad you came when I requested
    But I assure you I will not be bested
    In bed - or any other location.
    Take this ride and it will be your final destination.

    'cause there's nothing more serious,
    Than a game between two grown folks...
    You bring the sheet music,
    And I'll play your keynotes.

    I can see it now,
    Your exuberant skin and lips so lush.
    ...I'll play so rough
    You'll be the first Afrikan to ever blush.

    If the cops come knockin'
    We won't answer the door.
    'cuz we out in nature,
    Doin' what we was made for!

    Thanks so much for the pleasure,
    But now we must spiritually connect.
    I make love with my soul too,
    To show my ancestors respect.

    So wrap your arms around me,
    So we can reflect our shine.
    Thanks for the trip 4EVERLUV,
    The pleasure was all mine.

    :) Hope you were not dissapointed. 4EVERLUV's raw, beautiful approach nearly scared me away. But I tried.

    Thank you Queentswana and Rich! I pray you have been entertained.

    You have all three given me reason to feel that I am worthy of practicing writing.

    Many thanks.

    ~Ikoro
     
  6. 4EVERLUV

    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Aaah.... Ikoro that was really sensually sexy and sweet
    But Im not going to let you off that easy

    I did not mean to scare you with my raw aggression
    its just that that your flo was hott
    And 4EVER LUV’S a steamy drop

    You made my poetic wheels start turnin’
    So I just followed your lead and the words began to flee

    I know how you feel
    I remember the first time
    $$RICH$$ hit my thread
    I was like of all people
    to respond to my first post
    what did it have to be
    the Master of Poetry

    I was nervous as nervous can be
    But I flowed it back to him just like you
    flowed it back to me

    I hope you know your flo is so worthy
    so you keep doin’ what your doin’

    cuz Im gonna be checkn’ you out
    to see what your pen be talkin’ about

    and when the feeln’ hits me
    Im gonna bring it to you in my usual manner
    so don’t be scared just show me
    you can handle it.:)


    Ikoro, thank you for letting me flo with you it was really fun. I really luved your flo back too it was tyte. You keep writing. You are definitely in the right place for you writing skills to grow. There is so much talent here at Destee it is unbelieveable. Its like you get class without going to school.


    Much luv to you
     
  7. Ikoro

    Ikoro Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you ever so much for flowing with me. Makes me smile and blush everytime. Trying to rid myself of all this shyness. But blooming is painful (oh, gotta write about that). Thanks for the support, I'm sure you know it means a lot.

    I agree, Destee's got the hook-ups on talented poets and writers (not to mention intellectuals).

    It's so beautiful I am overwhelmed. Thank you for the praise, I will do what I can to live up to your expectations. To think one could find love like this on the net. My people are going all out on the digital..

    I tell ya, these are the times... :)

    ~Ikoro
     
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    this is still rather discreet to mwe it gets to the point without compromising the secrecy I can dig that
     
  9. spicybrown

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    Beautiful Ikoro... you got it goin on:welldone:

    :skate:

    :picture:
     
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