Black Poetry : Cupid's Quickening

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  1. epiphany

    epiphany Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The Arrow
    ~}~~~~>struck **
    ripping through
    vincible flesh
    piercing issues
    of trust and transition
    *penetrating
    the wall of doubt
    forging deeper
    it pricks vital opposition
    excuses to retreat
    from this rising flare
    and I simmer.....
    to deduce the reason
    ~behind
    Cupid's fateful twist
    my inner control
    ~is shaken
    my heart trembles
    as I calm the pain
    and awaken to esctasy
    slowly, I pull the arrow
    out oozes.......*love
    a Valentine inspired oracle
    predicting @-,--}-,--}- Love's Genesis

    Epiphany(c)2002
     
  2. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Go on wit'cha badddd selves!! :lol: This right heah is too cute for even cupid!!

    :)

    N2
     
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    "Epiphany"

    Nice scribe poet. Very Valentine! Tyte!!!:)
     
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    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I guess love really does hurt
    tyte scribe thanks for sharing
     
  5. Bishop

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    In case you didn't know Cupid is my nephew.........if you think he's something then wait until the Bishop bathes you in the light!!! Excellent Read Epiphany....Bring some more of this flava....
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow!! cupid strikes again .......tyght vibe
     
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    you betta slang that verbiage my sustuhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVEDEDED this...gonna read it some mo...

    yeah!

    a
     
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    Epiphany~

    I can't even put it into words... This was brilliant!!!

    Im lovin it!
    Reas
     
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    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Epip

    I ain't mad atcha




    One
     
  10. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    you my dear are a poet
    you have a way with words

    lovedided it
    love the ride

    dssNY
     
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