Black Poetry : CULTURE CUT

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Divided dismay of falsely phantomize

    hearts of deeds to destructional light keep mesmerizing
    pitted pain, beyond my dayz, realism and heart

    Culture cut penetrates deep against my flesh
    now like an virus, de'vor me da "assassination"
    for da killin fields of slittery tongue, stabes me .

    Kill not my passion of desires in which so forth written
    involuntary ejaculations senselessly is composed
    passed in my grassroots and limbs, you mitted me wit pain.

    They embrace conceptions as strength, and
    lies like a slow death to thy art of hand
    time come of a route, visible like da canvas

    I maybe of emptyness, whom lip themselves of my slate
    as da blade cuts in a divine line between love n' hate
    where it sheer da skin deep, wide and repeatedly

    Fo, la, te, da passin i salute canvas of culture cut
    my heart will not pump dead blood yet bleed
    here i abandon da kiss for da tomb is open

    yet kiss lonelyness, like tears which (cannot) weep
    just face culture cut of dismay destruction
    da womb drips da blood, stain upon my glass.
    :peace:
     
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    afrostotle Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Me Breathless...Brother Poet/Teacher...superp use of metaphor...

    Express on Bruh...Express on
     
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    Thankz.... As it's expressed i will be me beyond what's not seen that i am ....much luv afrostotle
     
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    Da cutting edge
    of a double blade sword
    dat swoops against my skin
    I bleed da notion
    yet i stand as tall & greater
    when i'm culture cut !
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    the metphors in this deep. i had to read read and i got a different meaning after the second read. this was nicely posed and i think speaks volumes of pain disappointment but not giving up still i raise i dont know i be reading it again soon.

    when i dont have my coffee in the morning i have alot of thoughts lol and still cant write one poem. anywhos....i like your poem

    Peace of Angel
     
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    big thanks i'll break it down fo ya !!!......lol
     
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