Black Poetry : CRYING WOMAN

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  1. Sun Ship

    Sun Ship Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The sound of a crying woman
    is like the call of the wild

    Her tears are heard afar

    The holy ones hide their selves
    and commit the sins of cowards

    Cold hearts become snares
    As warm hearts are stressed

    The tears of a crying woman
    glisten in a moon lit night

    All buildings have wailing walls
    In the Black world
    One cries before cracked plaster
    As another mourns before the mountain

    The sounds of a crying woman
    disturbs God
    and those who are drunk on the wine of wisdom

    These are not tears of joy

    These tears wet the cheeks
    and all that is dry

    Tears that call on the wild side of reason

    Tears that call the reasonable to go wild
    and into the wilderness, where she is


    Sun Ship © 2003
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes i hear the weeps of her cry in the windz
    this was well done
     
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    " Tears that call the reasonable to go wild
    and into the wilderness, where she is "


    When a woman crys. A man looses his ability to think or reason. He can't understand. But should try.

    A women is crying for some reason.
     
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    i liked this:)...so reall....but in a way, i took it fro,m a sad approach
     
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    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was beautiful and deep.
     
  6. Sun Ship

    Sun Ship Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THANK YOU FOR READING MY PIECE.
    YOUR SUPPORT IS A BLESSING AND GIVES ME STRENGTH .


    No one can express the pain of a family or a people like the sound of a woman’s cry.
    It soars through the universe.
    Sometimes more powerful than prayer.
    This piece is, as much, about the power of her essence and her being, rather than just her sorrows.

    PEACE AND LOVE ASHE
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ah...tears...I know them all too well...beautiful message :)
     
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    i like this alot really nice
     
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    I know the sound........it will reach within places in you
    you didn't even know existed until...the cry unlocked it
    you articulated this so masterfully........a very original piece indeed!

    the cry of a woman...I know this and I'm into this piece!
     
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