Black Poetry : crying out.........

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by SPIRITNORTH, Mar 15, 2004.

  1. SPIRITNORTH

    SPIRITNORTH Banned MEMBER

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    i got to give this
    one last try
    i got to reach u
    before i die
    i got to know
    we can be
    together like
    my mind conceived
    i must tell
    God heard my prayer
    and touched you
    when i wasn't there
    i got to hold
    i can't let go
    if this can work
    i got to know
    i have to feel
    my tears no more
    and laff like we
    did once before
    i cannot leave
    until it's done
    if any time left
    let us be the one
    if i gotta write a letter
    or give a speech
    if i gotta sing hymns
    or even preach
    i gotta love free
    i want u to see me
    lets erase the confusion
    im sorry if i hurt you
    i got to know
    that this can work
    but all im asking
    is for one thing
    your honest
    effort.....................
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nicely done poetess
     
  3. twision

    twision Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very good!!
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow much love
    flow it freely
    feeling this
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
  5. MADDRAPPER

    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was nice enjoyed but kinda sad well let me kick this here

    Cry out, try doubt the truth like newspaper corrupt headlines
    Mess up and misled minds in some cases stuck and fed crimes
    To folks, last week rhymes blast streets crack sold in dimes
    Arrive to the conclusion must survive this illusion but reality
    Doe, fatality grow
     
  6. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nive very nice
    feel this one
    peace
    angel
     
  7. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ahhhh yeah this is tyte, love it
    :heart:
    -story
     
  8. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Doesn't seem like too much to ask for, some honest effort. I felt the heartache in this emotive flow.
     
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