Black Poetry : Crying Now

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The pain cries out
    And the heart falls
    Rolls black tears
    Of fears
    As the depth of me dies
    And the meaning of us
    Is left in a unfinished chapter
    The book was torn and pages unwritten
    As we mended the words
    And made promises
    What did I do to deserve this pain

    Dayum you

    Crying now
    Crying now
    Lost in the wind
    As the earth shakes
    Rainbows disappear
    And the clouds take cover
    Like a stake in my heart
    A betrayal in the storm

    Why

    But you have no clue
    As my soul dies
    Your blind
    I poured out my heart to you

    You called me your butterfly

    Always holding my hand
    You got me you say
    Do you got me now?

    Your loved pulled me out my slumber
    Now I feel weak it cuts so deep
    Now you’re gone

    As a friend you’re dear
    But as my lover
    You completed me

    What did I do for all this pain?

    The let down
    Stirs inside
    But I guess your only human
    And I should of known
    But I trusted in away
    I never trusted before

    Why

    You’re the reason why I bloom
    You’re the reason my world was brighter
    Crying now
    Crying now
    What is this all about?
    Can’t believe you’re gone
    Like the wind

    But your love still dwells

    Deep with in me
    No one I wanting more
    It seeps in my blood
    Are you coming back?
    In my next life time
    Or am I just a past chapter
    Of no love return

    For I am dying

    I poured out my sorrow and pain
    And you still turn your back
    Despite of all we gone through
    You’re still the one I love

    I love......

    My world was brighter
    As I cry to the heavens
    The pain shoots like
    Fire burning my heart
    And fading my soul
    What did I do to deserve all this pain?
    Crying now
    Crying now……

    How could you?

    (C) 2004
    unwritten files​
     
  2. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Cry him a river and drown us in your beautiful prose.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    flowing from da depth of ya heart in da tears of hope
    very well said
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was a very emotive flow, deeply written.
     
  5. Eisha

    Eisha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :heart: This was very deep. Alot of emotional thoughts. Lovin it. :heart:
     
  6. PurpleMoons

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    You know sis, there are
    times when we feel so alone
    in our pains. But once we
    get through all the hurt and
    we look back at it's price,
    we realize that we have become
    stronger and wiser.

    Although we want the sunshine
    all the time, we have to expect
    the rain. It's balances our life.

    Luv ya sis!

    I felt every word. Strong, heartfelt flow!
     
  7. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    PurpleMoons..so true .thank for the love and support always sis... :hearts2:

    :wave:Eisha thank you for the love sis..happy you likes

    $$RICH$$ thank you for the love and support means alot happy you enjoyed the flow :hearts2:

    1poetsought..thank you happy you enjoyed poet....

    watz...thanks for the peep in

    Peace
    Angel
     
  8. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Love, makes us do foolish things, it makes us :nuts: ...it makes us :mad: , we are sometimes :argue: ...and we sometimes :laugh: and :bawling: and it's all in the game...of love
    Yeah, you laid this out with a "feeling" ...this piece is tight.
     
  9. monad.poetress

    monad.poetress Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Flow :sand: Flow :sand: Flow :sand:

    I felt every line. Sometimes you have to cry it out and flow it out to feel better. You have to let him have it so you can move on.
     
  10. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    queentswana..yes it do indeed thank you my sister for your reply and love with support on this flow..much love to you

    monad.poetress..cry it out flow it yes indeed...but to break it down he aint even seen yet i think its about to get raw up in here :lol: thanks for the love and support happy you enjoyed

    Peace
    Angel
     
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