Black Poetry : Cryin in da Rain

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Cryin in the rain
    So no one can see my tears
    Lost hurt
    Burning in a flame
    Twisted
    Betrayed living a lie….
    Forbidden taste should
    of known better
    but spinning in the bliss
    able to release…
    once more love have left me in
    the cold…drowning in ice water
    unable to swim…. :crying:

    See you reach for love…
    And life lets you know
    That your not to be loved….
    Cryin in the rain
    the burning wont stop…
    the heart aches
    wanting to cut it out…
    born a mistake
    lost in a cruel world…..
    knowing love don’t love me
    never a rose or a pearl…
    black is my soul…
    passion of purple bleeds gray
    as my spirit forgets to awake… :crying:

    still waiting on you
    but its no us..
    lost in the myth
    lost in the moment
    and drown in the pain….
    Cryin in the rain…
    Trying to heal
    Put the pain stays…
    So if you hear me calling
    Tell me something better
    Because what I thought
    Seems to be wrong….
    So y speak the words if you
    didn’t mean them
    Why hum that verse if
    it was a game
    To wake me up to place
    me back to sleep…
    if I am your rose
    y let me die again? :crying:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Rain drop cover up
    well felt here
    weep not forth the warmth to
    kiss every tear is near u
    fear not the tears that leak in da rain
    so forth let it be washed aways to happiness
    sunshine and sweet hello
    let it all run now in da rain....flow on
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Such an emotive flow. You can almost feel the words on the page.
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the support rich
    you always show...means alot
    Rain drops cover the tears
    But what takes the pain…
    the soul to fold
    Weep not forth in the eye of one
    In the heavens the thunder roars….
    As happiness pass once more
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the support sis
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    tears in the rain flow like tides of the beach
    ever changing with time yet always in reach
    Dew drops of a rose as the petal is exposed
    see the frial textures reveil life's many woes
    See tears in the rain is why I want to go outside
    Im your umbrella of protection so lady step inside!


    Your flow was an insperation and I celibrate your creation within this drop.
    :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown:
     
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    very beautiful sis
    nice flow
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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    I feel this . Like I've been there before.
    Well put very emotional.
    Nice work.
     
  9. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    CP....
    my umbrella of protection i step inside
    from the rain my tears run like dew
    from the morning flower....
    thanks for the flow really enjoyed it
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Bluewater, thatgirl74...thanks for the support on this
    glad you both enjoyed
    much love
    Angel
     
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