Black Poetry : Cry For My Mommy

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  1. SensualReality

    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I cried for my mommy whenever I was hurting
    I cried for my mommy whenever I was happy
    Now I cry for my mommy for all that I've put her through and what we've been through
    She's always been there for me when my daddy didn't really care
    She was patient with me when I gave her an evil stare
    Always there to provide for me anything I asked she'd give
    They say I'm a little spoiled,but so what she loves me and I love her
    Even when I disobey I say I'm sorry for how I treat her
    When she's out of it and feels like throwing in the towel
    I pat her back and say the Lord will make a way somehow
    Even when I don't say thank you for all the things she's done she knows I appreciate her
    Sometimes when the going gets tough and I can't see my way
    She doesn't take me to the "eye doctor"
    She just lifts her hands and says,"Baby it's alright just pray."
    No other woman can feel her shoes and when it hurts really bad she says
    "This is gonna hurt me more than it hurts you."
    I don't believe it and continue to rebel agaisnt her
    Trying to not be like her I say I dont listen but what she tells me I take to others
    Maybe she didn't teach me all that I know about this world
    But when I get out of line she reminds me that I'm still just a girl
    No one else lay flat on a bed with their legs wide open for all to see
    Just to bring into this world "lil' ole ungreatful me"
    But I do thank her and that's something I gotta say
    Spreading wings and blessings like the Lord up above
    I have nothing to give her but my love.
    :wave:
     
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    and your love worth more then any gift given
    very nice da love of mom's
     
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    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Tanky Tanky Richie Rich :wink:
    :love: the mommies
     
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    this was wonderful
    give her your love
    nothing like ya mother....
    loved this
     
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    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanx MBA I will show her all the love I can :wave:
     
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    Tears runnin down my eyes, I too have to cry happy and sad tears for my mother. The protector of her children.
     
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    So wonderful, this felt real because I know it is. I'm sure your mom will cherish this poem.
     
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    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Aw thanx everybody and this was real,I know she'll love it because I have been a lil hard headed :lol::wave:
     
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    Classic...statement but Oh, so true...
    one day you'll know and say the very same... :wink:

    Beautifully Emotive Peace SensualReality!
     
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    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanx sage when I wrote that line I smiled so hard cuz she said that everytime she beat my tail:lol::wave:
     
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