Black Poetry : CRY DIFFERENT

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by mistaliberator, Apr 6, 2004.

  1. mistaliberator

    mistaliberator Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    FORGIVE ME IM SEARCHING FOR THE RIGHT LOVE
    NOT ONLY AT NIGHT LOVE
    CANT FIGHT LOVE
    SO I WRITE LOVE
    AND
    INVITE LOVE IN
    FORGIVE ME IM SEARCHING FOR THAT
    OVER COUNTER LOVE
    THE LOVE THAT LOVES TO LOVE
    LOVE
    SHE DIDINT BELIEVE LOVE SO SHE STRAYED
    LOVE
    FALLING IN AND OUT OF THIS
    SOMETIMES I CLOSE MY EYES
    AND GET LOST IN HER SOUL
    FOR A MINUTE
    SAID SHE LOVED ME BUT DID SHE MEAN IT
    SO NOW BRING IT
    SIGN SEAL AND DELIVER AND SING IT
    IT WAS DIRTY LOVE
    SO I HAD TO CLEAN IT
    BLEACHED IT OUT
    REACHED OUT
    AND WIPED IT OUT
    NOW IM LEFT WITHOUT
    THE LOVE THAT I WANTED
    BABY IM GIVING YOU PREMISSON TO FLOSS
    THIS
    CAUSE WE LOST THIS
    AND ITS BEEN A MINUTE
    BUT SOMETIMES I CLOSE MY EYES AND STILL GET LOST IN YOU
    SOMETIMES I WAKE UP FROM THE DREAM
    DOUBTING US AND MY SELF
    IF IT WAS LOVE
    THAN IT WOULDNT BE SO HARD TO SEE
    IF IT WAS LOVE IT WOULD JUST
    BE
    I NEED THAT WARM LOVE
    NEVER COLD LOVE
    THE LOVE THAT LOVES
    TO LOVE
    LOVE THAT
    LOVE THAT LOVES TO LOVE ITSELF
    I WANT THAT REAL LOVE
    THAT CANT NOBODY KILL LOVE
    BECAUSE I FEEL THIS LOVE
    TODAY I CLOSE MY EYES AND GET LOST IN YOU
    FOR REAL LOVE
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed i know all about this search quest u on
    continue the path ahead is right .....moving forward ----->
     
  3. twision

    twision Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Tell you what my little brother
    I'm on dat search as well!!!!!

    You posed this one on point
    But then....
    What can I expect from such a talent
    One love...Keep scribin'



    PEACE AND LOVE
    twision
     
  4. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Im feelin u on this, all the way. nice drop.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Liked the pace of this, the way you flowed those words together, well posed.
     
  6. mistaliberator

    mistaliberator Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you

    WELL I WENT BACK AND RE DID IT SO IT WOULD MAKE SENSE TO ME SO THANK YOU FOT THE SUPPORT THAT YALL JUST KEEP SENDING
     
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    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Just "be-ing" works

    I like that.
    Good !!!
    I guess your were right about
    just be ing huh!!!
     
  8. mistaliberator

    mistaliberator Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    LOVE IS ALWAYS A CRAZY THING
     
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