Black Poetry : crushed

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by the_story, Jul 9, 2003.

  1. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i feel like a bird who can soar with
    golden wing over clouds white,blu,purple
    green,

    obstructed,from the soft view of heaven
    and paradise,blind to time,tring to intently
    listen to the song that seemed to impregnate
    its sweet soul, and plant seeds
    embedded in vocal cords
    lovin the words that tumbles in this groove,
    only today words dont come from her seasoned
    vocal cords.they are silenced......crushed.......

    like a bird who can't soar with golden wings over clouds white,blu,
    ,purple,and green
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey the_story.
    i am feeling this..
    this is wonderful
    i can feel that crushed
    soar and fly
    like the bird in the sky
    wonderful flow
    Peace
     
  3. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank u blue i apprieciate this, for a second i thought yall forgot about me on the real.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dis was outstanding flowin'
    well felt and scribe feeling dis .....
    let da ink drip !
     
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    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THANK U THANK U I'M GLAD U LIKE IT
     
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