Quiet Poetry Lounge : Crush

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by flo-real, Mar 9, 2005.

  1. flo-real

    flo-real Active Member MEMBER

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    At the mention of your name.... I feel a wisp of wind come through my body frame
    as if your spirit is passing through mine, allowing these two vessels to lock & intertwine
    forming a feeling so deep till it passes through my heart and makes it's way down to my soul
    paving the way for this love's beauty to unfold.
    your tunnel of intellect penetrates the very core of my being creating sight for me with out even seeing
    somehow effecting the way I write, forcing me to mentally lock my lips to your lips tasting words to recite
    and wisdom to swallow filling my womb up and never leaving me hollow,
    this feeling so intense it transforms me from once trend setting to now follow. I even ask at times how so?
    I am inspired when I look in your eyes, and they look back at me as if to say with you I don't have to put up a disguise.
    and when you say my name...don't say my name...
    flo- real...
    mmph he said my name my body numbs until I can't feel!
    that is what you do to me, the very thought of you sends electric chills through my arteries
    and clogs them with platelets of sense & direction,education,motivation and a multiple count of affection that grows and flows daily
    so open wounds and cuts could never hurt this flesh for I am filled with your chromosomes set to protect me
    it was no coincidence the universe put us in that place to meet we
    you speak to the poetentials asleep inside of me
    a simple notion from you makes me feel complete and, what I'm trying to say...well I don't want you to read to deep
    into...but it's hard to find the words to say how I feel about you... the universes truth... a god from birth... with unexplainable worth ...so good it hurts! and as I write....and write ......and write to try and create the words to describe you
    I realize that I can't because they're not beautiful enough......or don't mount up too!!
    what I'm trying to say is.... I have a crush on you!
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A "crush" doesn't quite do justice to these words so intense with feeling. This had such a genuine vibe to it poet. Flow on.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sound like love , this was outstanding beautiful sista
     
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    Object of heart's desire indeed

    How Lovely... this should to be read
    along with an interpretive dance peice

    :bellydance: :band: I can just see it...

    Much Peace
    and Love,
    Akilah :spinstar:
     
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    AHMOSE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WOW, you crushed me with this piece I like I like.
     
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