Black Poetry : Crusading of a thought

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Mental runnin free….
    Tryin to stay above ground…
    Flowin in and out
    As the pain defeats the love
    Unsure of the way to go
    Lost in a world…
    Dyin to live
    Wantin to live to die
    A flower blooms to die
    Sun rise and set
    As the moon
    takes its place….
    the undertaker
    releases and the soul
    Floats..ship wreck as
    Memories fade
    Tryin to stay but
    Covered by the dark
    As the mind goes and
    the eyes closed..
    Mind on full
    Release
    Crusading of a thought
    here comes the steam….
    Like a lightin beam
    Starz fall in a stream
    But ummmmm
    What goes up
    must come down….
    Wrong direction
    Forgot to
    follow instruction
    Destruction falls
    Flow on and on…..
    Mental free
    forward I move
    Knowledge within
    as I take this walk
    Within my mental
    To unfold the vision
    in this journey
    Of hope
    Crusading of a thought
     
  2. PositiveMindset

    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Freedom...

    "Give us Free!" (as spoken by Cinque in Amistad)

    It's nice 2 open the mind, free it of all inhibitions, & allow it 2 speak.

    Nice.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    freedom is from within da mental
    this was very tyte flowing sistah
     
  4. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$..indeed..your poem
    developed this scribe by me
    it spoke to me
    so thank you for writtin journey
    Crusading of a thought was born....

    PositiveMindset .. thank you for takin
    time and replin glad you like the scribe

    Peace and love to both of you
    Angel
     
  5. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    HARD HITTER!

    This was very edgy and very strong and strident! I could hear it at the backdrop of a freedom
    rally of some sort...wonderful when your words inspire vision! And moves us to speak!
    Again nothing but the best, different than your norm but still "OUTSTANDING"!
    snap*snap*

    BLESSINGS ON YOUR HOUSE!
     
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