Black Poetry : Crumble

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  1. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I wake up.....
    Ready to conquer the world.
    Saying today is the last day
    that I will allow myself to think of you.
    This is the last day that I will allow you to
    Penetrate my mind,
    Steal my senses,
    I wake up with every single sense in the world that
    today will be a good day.
    That there's an ocean filled with men just waiting
    for me to give them my name.
    And then I start my day off and I'm fine,
    Perfectly fine until....
    Something reminds me of you.
    A certain song,
    A familiar face,
    A certain sound......
    And then the memories come into my head.
    They swim around my mind and bring back
    all of the the emotions that I had
    so carefully hidden away.
    "That's what he used to wear" and
    "I wonder what he's doing right now"
    Anxiety arises in my heart.
    Stress tightens my nerves.
    I remember you're in a new relationship.
    And then the tears start to seep....
    I go to sleep.......
    Wishing I could turn back time,
    that you were still with me.
     
  2. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey guys. Bear with me becuz right now, I'm suffering from a self inflicted broken heart and it's nothing nice. sorry bout the sad poetry for my return
     
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    Aww its ok
    We got you
    Dont fall please
    Love hurts for real
    Espicially when that special
    Someone isnt there
    Much love Poet
     
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    love is a powerful emotion don't feel bad we all been burned. so let if flow however you want.
     
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    Wow...I felt this one, posed just so... They say everything happens for a reason, and we may not understand why now, but one day it falls into place. You won't feel this way forever poet.
     
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    feeling you deeply and understand
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank ya'll so much for giving me love. I really need it around this time
     
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    This too shall pass!!!

    Hey SwtT....Don't Crumble... Yeah LOVE is truly a funny thang, and yeah sometimes we do "self inflict" the pain, but at the end of the day when it's all said and done you will be much stronger, and smarter and will be more carefull next time around.

    Sometimes life can catch one off guard and as a result, one has to deal with the reaction of their actions. But be encourage and please know that this too shall pass!
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you so much sonnee
     
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    You are most Welcome :grouphug:
     
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