Black Poetry : Crucify Me

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  1. jus_dat_nice

    jus_dat_nice Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Crucify me

    And let me die
    I'll carry my cross alone
    Because my burdens are mine to carry
    Hammer me to my wooden grave
    And let me be
    Deprive me of my necessity
    Strip me of my love
    So I can suffer painfully
    Burn me to ash
    The proper punishment meant for me
    Crucify me
    And let me die
    Let my tears fall freely
    Take away the one thing I love dearly
    I've fought too hard, I'm weary
    So beat me more and let blood flow onto your whip
    Let your tounge lashes inflict a million more gashes
    Wrap my thorns around my head and mock me
    Humiltate me and make me pay for my so-called crime
    Nail me with my arms spread wide
    Let the rain pour over me and cleanse me of sin
    Crucify me
    And let me die
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    my my my !!! speachless here
    so much i wanna say but i'll save it for another day
    awesome scribing had my mind thinking ...touched from this joint here
     
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    JDN....It is very apparent how deep within yourself you traveled to unearth the treasures and depth of this.

    ....you truly solidified and captured raw emotion...a pain, with no backdrop...how powerful


    deeply felt, and understood.
     
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    jus_dat_nice Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks apple*pie and $$RICH$$
    This really was an emotional piece :SuN029:
     
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    Feelings are fathoms deep here, expressed with vivid ink poetess.
     
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    jus_dat_nice Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sometimes emotions need to hit you on the head and sometimes all you need is a whisper, this was a little of both.
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    such strength

    when you've had enough you've had enough

    and when it's time to stand up you stand up

    sometimes standing up for what you believe in

    could results in losing your life

    in a spiritual sense


    :thinking:
     
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    jus_dat_nice Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    mos definately so'ja true words
     
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    Crucify me.....

    Crucify her
    Is my mind to say to me
    but the her is me
    how could this be
    my mind, my worst enemy
    crucify her
    for I know what lies and waits
    in the pendulum of her essence
    born out of anger
    no love, no unholy
    anger to herself
    she is a stranger
    crucify her
    she is a threat to survival
    to her there is no revival
    she sticks out like a sore thumb
    she can't be number one
    crucify her
    she can't save herself
    what wealth can we take
    her life, a mistake
    crucify her
    crucify me
    I’m tired of your hate
    the will to fight you
    through useless debate
    crucify me!!!
    crucify me!!!
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    heavy laden...

    ...with the burdens of life...the struggles of everyday sometimes get in the way of happiness...and, yes, i know the pain...but you never have to carry that burden...alone.

    LET US SUFFER TOGETHER.
     
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