Black Poetry : Crowning Glory

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by NapturallyYours, Aug 3, 2006.

  1. NapturallyYours

    NapturallyYours Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey brotha

    Oh my goodness…

    It’s so big

    I’ve never seen one that size before

    I guess I shoulda asked somebody

    It’s so beautiful

    Sittin’ up proud in all its splendor and glory

    I mean I know size doesn’t matter, but

    [email protected], my brotha

    May I touch it?

    My, my, my…it feels so good

    I’m impressed

    Not many men are in your category

    Wouldn’t it be a blessing if they were?

    Who knows…

    Maybe one day

    My fro will be as big as yours.
     
  2. asimplepoet

    asimplepoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    LOL. I loved the way that was laid out. This was :terrific:
     
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    choclatangel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    LOVED the way you put this flo down...would be a good performance piece with a few tweaks.
     
  4. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :skillet: ...that's for taking my/our mind where it shouldn't have been...
    I had to smile when I read the ending...smh
    nice piece poet
     
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    spicybrown Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ri ri...

    Nothing compares to a thick, luscious, glistening, spongy afro...don't they look great on the Brothers:blush:...Poor me...I'm in love with a low cut tapered fade though:nuts:

    Kewl flow

    love it when them afros glow

    through the rain sleet and snow

    nothing compares fa-sho:spinstar:

    :picture:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    awesome drop from da top ......love the way u displayed this joint
     
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    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Tyte write....
     
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    phenomenalwoman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You know you ain't right, but I guess I couldn't even say that if my mind wasn't in the gutter. LOL, but I do like the way this was laid out.
     
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    moham Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What's the right word for this piece? ..Sassy? Besides that,this one was cool. Cool like the fro on his gorgeous head... :look:
     
  10. sweettee29

    sweettee29 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    that was tight suga flo on

    much much love sweette29
     
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