Black Poetry : Crossing Souls...

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  1. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I know you are out there

    I
    sense
    your face among
    the crowd

    I
    smell
    the scent of
    you passing in the wind

    I know you are out there

    because…

    birds
    carry the sound
    of your voice in their chorus

    relationships…

    some
    have come and
    gone and left me with the taste of
    bittersweet memories

    but…

    I don’t regret any

    I
    see
    lovers loving
    each other all around me lips and arms
    lock together

    I don’t envy them

    they
    ensue dreams of
    us in the future living a life together
    full of love and
    happiness

    there
    were flowers delivered
    just because

    romantic
    nights cuddled
    on sandy beaches waiting
    for the sun to come over the horizon

    our
    eyes and
    smiles were lit up
    with the love shared between us

    and…

    making
    love was the best time
    of our day


    those
    images keep
    me out of the arms of
    loneliness

    until
    our
    lives
    cross

    I know you are out there

    somewhere
    searching for me
    as I am searching for you

    I
    have
    faith

    in
    time our
    souls will be revealed to
    each other





    MaddSistahlyLove!
    Coco:heart:

    Copyright©2008cj

     
  2. DymePlaya2g

    DymePlaya2g Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    AWWWW...

    Sis,

    This was so sweet and heartfelt. Living your life knowing that love exists or is getting prepared for you, or even searching for you in the meantime is the most realistic approach. Again, I've exhaled reading you.

    "those
    images keep
    me out of the arms of <---------------you SAID that!!! :bingo:
    loneliness"


    LOVE&RESPECT,
    DP2G
     
  3. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    beautiful sis

    beautiful

    so graphic you put me right there

    i'm waiting to see what happens

    peace poet
     
  4. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I've been told...

    love is worth waiting for and when it comes we need to be open to receive it.


    Thank you So’ja & Dyme for coming through and giving a sistah some love.

    Its appreciated, BIGTIME you know!:)


    MaddSistahlyLove!
    Coco:heart:
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    being available for love...

    ...expecting that love will happen...when it happens. destiny. fate. star crossed lovers. and all that. once it happens, AND IT WILL HAPPEN, you will only wonder why it took so long for it to happen...and hope it never ends. BEAUTIFUL PIECE of PEACE

    LIFE IS GOOD.

    let your river flow.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sensing him, before you can actually see him, knowing that he is around, and that the moment when he extends his hand, yours will be there to take it. Utterly beautiful, I can so appreciate this write sis, wow.
     
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    I could hear a smooth Floetry harmony under these words, cocoa .... very heartfelt, Sis ... makesmewannasingggg ;-)
     
  8. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hello...

    Baller
    Watz
    and
    Spirit

    Your responses have given this piece even more meaning.
    Thank you for receiving and giving back. I appreciate it, BIGTIME!


    MaddSistahlyLove!
    Coco:heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    This was so divine and beautifully sweet had me floatin on a cloud as if i was right there..wow
     
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    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Beautiful Poem sister.
    Very smooth flowing
    Flow on
     
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