Quiet Poetry Lounge : Cross my soul

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Cross my soul
    Fire burns
    The pain
    the hate
    Tryin to lift
    But drown
    Screaming cant release
    My tears burn
    for I cant
    hold on dying slowly
    the fire destroy
    and the life dies…..
    fade dreams
    pain of hurt
    shame to show face
    lost in a twist
    cant turn
    backwards rewind….
    Fallin
    Fallin
    Cant climb no more
    At the end
    of the road….
    Cant take no more…
    Twisted in a maze
    Yelling hating the world
    Momma why you
    You leave me
    All alone…
    Lost in the dark
    cant breath…..
    why
    why
    why
    lost in the mist
    and cant come out
    depression sets in
    and the cycle
    of the tears flow
    Cross my soul
    Fire burns
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    heated scribing dis was tyte da fire burning in a blaze
    whewwwwwwww!!!
     
  3. SensualReality

    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Burnin up

    Hot is like burnin up oooooh that was good I felt.....
     
  4. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the support on
    this and just taken time to read
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    So emotively written. I know what it is to feel as though you can't breathe, because life has kicked you so hard.
     
  6. tUFFY

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    earthshaking, earthquaking, I like it more than you will ever know. Keep cranking them out. tUFFY :hot:
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the replies
    and support
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice scribe sis
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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