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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Painted in screams

    brushed upon dreams
    artisticly da maze team

    carved in technicolor shades
    of historic blue
    memories of past truth

    Lava in da blood red
    leakage of morrow
    as captivity looms

    opal orange against da brown
    seen cross da town
    as i take a full slowdown

    many men standing in disray
    ova da shadows as thy lay
    as da forefront stood still

    My eyez glance outward corner
    there da landz of thy mother
    clashing in greyish green

    stumbling into da noose
    hung thy life of living
    head upright callin not in vain

    yet vainglory da cry sounds
    ancestors spirit dance in da
    radiant background of deeper south

    findprint denounced me as followed

    I am not but i am there i will be
    for i'm not beaten but free at last
    at last my place has come and
    home is where i be ...........F*R*E*E
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You've painted a scene that encompasses what you see today, while the images of yesterday loom in the background. Very artistically done, Rich, as I can imagine those images that you've scribed.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes watz i found that looking from the other side and reading da print
    my mind opens to light and see where one must be to taste what it's
    like to be free .......Thank u sista for the continue love
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    life imitating art

    or the other way around?

    very visual here $$$RICH$$$

    man this is on another level
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    thankz so'ja my mental mind was st. Eleswhere thinking of the feeling
    from what is and where i lone to be .....
     
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    brotha...i see you haven't lost any of your fire...
    you've managed to get hotter and hotter!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    just trying to stay in da flow of it and step by step keeping up with da poet's
     
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