Black Poetry : CRITICIS[him]

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  1. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My body temperature rises
    to 104 degrees
    irregardless of the
    amount of pressure applied
    when you piss me off
    uncontrollable anger
    is released
    my mouth has influence
    over the words
    I speak..saying what's
    been fighting internalization
    within my mind
    my tongue lashes out
    sharp to sever
    as so are the blades
    of a Swiss Army
    ...cut out your
    aortic root and verbally
    I surgically perform
    open-heart valve replacement
    replacing your soul
    with my stones that I've
    thrown
    I've become the projectile
    that started at
    ground zero
    hitting the center
    of you with
    unmistakeable
    marksmanship precision
    my words
    slice through your
    jugular to inject
    critical judgment
    into your veins
    transporting feelings
    away from your
    cranium just to
    inflict the pain
    that you made me
    feel at one time
    when I was weak
    ~you took me to
    a breaking point
    dropped me off and
    that's when I began
    to
    think...think...think...think...think
    about how
    you've never been the
    brightest crayon in the box -
    ...now have you
    I've finally took courage
    got on my own two feet
    and walked confidently past you
    so...I've moved
    past the point of no return
    and beyond the service
    of sarcasm you so frequently
    offered to me
    now I have
    learned the art of
    of expressing myself
    to you
    and it too has become
    my mastery



    (c) 2001 SOULOFASISTA
     
  2. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Then what color is the crayon in the box? If he ain't the brightest? Again (ho hum) it's tight.

    one love,blak
     
  3. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Blak~

    Whyte ...
    that's the color in the crayon box deary!!
    It's dull...to me....at least!