Black Poetry : Critical Condition

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Reason, Mar 25, 2001.

  1. Reason

    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    He and I
    our love is like...Critical
    not only bonded in spiritual but...
    mental AND emotional
    Soon to be bonded by the lustful juices of...
    the physical
    loving simultaneously with
    an unmeasurable level of...
    InteNsity...
    Know you desire me like...
    a thirsty kitten lapping the milk
    from his bowl...
    You say fate and destiny's playin' hide and seek
    am I the one in which you speak...
    No longer a mystery
    claiming our detiny
    The object of my affection is...

    Hella tight, Reas!!! You are most def an inspiration!!
    Afri
     
  3. YeshuJah

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    Love & its wonders..Reason,

    they never cease to amaze, do they? Thanks for sharing.

    JAH Lives.
     
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    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    <<<< this is me... breathing again... aahhhhh

    REASON (wind beneath my poetic wings)...

    "you are to me... what rain is to the sea
    a constant reminder of where i want to be"...;)

    i am indeed breathing again!!... thank you
    for hearing my pleas & returning to grace me
    with your beautiful poetic presense...
    you know i love this piece... especially this:

    (sangin) you can't keep running in & out of my life!
    boy!... you betta remember dat!! :lol: besides...
    the Sun can't Shyne with out cha!

    :heart:U4Life~...
     
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    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Reason

    this is BEE YOU TEE FUL! What a soul you possess, Poet!

    Thank you,

    A
     
  6. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Reas,

    This flow has touched me because it reads so genuinely. Beautiful piece my brotha!!!!!

    Your poetical prowess is endless!!! Welcome home!!!

    Peace
    GQ
     
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    Street So'ja Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Reason the Man

    My eyes are an ocean in which my dreams are reflected.

    yo dawg felt this line here dawg

    you repping
     
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    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    Welcome ~ Welcome ~ Welcome

    :wave: :wave: :wave:

    Whew! Such a Beautiful Flow
    thank you for this!

    ~ Welcome ~ Welcome ~ Welcome ~

    :heart:

    Destee
     
  9. MapleXtract

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    Now, I know you don't need my little bitty two cents, 'cause you know this is a hot piece; but I wouldn't be Maple if I didn't show you love... :kiss:
     
  10. 8th wonder

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    You already know that I think
    you are.... Incredible... Your work
    is so moving... Thanks brotha!!

    8th!
     
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