Black Poetry : Creeping

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by phenomenalwoman, Sep 21, 2004.

  1. phenomenalwoman

    phenomenalwoman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Shhhhhh
    Peace......
    You hear that?
    Peace.....
    Let me enjoy the peaceful moments
    Let me tiptoe through the serenity
    While it last
    Shhhhhh
    Let me enjoy it
    Just a couple minutes more
    I know the real world is waiting
    I know the issues are creeping
    I can feel sista Drama watching me like a hawk
    And I aint mad at her
    I do not fear her
    There is something to be said about Drama
    As much as I dislike her presence
    She gives me something to think about
    write about
    pray about
    live through
    getover
    and conquer
    you dont have to creep Drama
    I'm prepared
    Bring it on
     
  2. BlatinaPoet4u

    BlatinaPoet4u Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very tyte flow!!! Keep doin ya thing i loved the scribe. :deal:
     
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    nice flow...enjoyed it...flow on..... :angel1:
     
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    This is very nice.

    Creeping Drama. Sweeping Drama. Peeping Drama. Heaping Drama all around us now.

    We see it clearly :deal: since you wrote about it Phenomenal. :spinstar: Flow on.
     
  5. phenomenalwoman

    phenomenalwoman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i appreciate the love blantina, d mzblkangel and hodee. thank you
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The way the poem read in the beginning, I thought this was going to be a gentle flow. I wasn't disappointed mind you. I liked the way you handled the subject of drama, you put a creative spin on it.
     
  7. phenomenalwoman

    phenomenalwoman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    well its funny as much as it is a blessing to be living without, i must say i kinda miss the excitement of it. i'm just crazy i guess
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    let it flow yes indeed bring it on ...love this piece
     
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    as a recovered dramaholic, I do know what ya sayin. :lol: but on the real, this is a tight flow, to be enjoyed
     
  10. phenomenalwoman

    phenomenalwoman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks rich, lol gempis i'm glad you feel me on the drama tip. thank you both for commenting
     
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