Black Poetry : Creeping Joe - The Afronet Files

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  1. Bishop

    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Creeping Joe loved to creep
    Sitting at the club
    He saw a lady that he wanted to freak
    I told him Joe leave that trick alone
    But he said Creeping Joe is taking her home
    Went up to her and told her his name
    Grabbed her on the butt what can I say he has no shame
    They started to dance all freaky and buck wild
    She down on all four while he pretending to be handling it doggie style
    But then a slow jam started up
    He pulled her close to him still holding her butt
    Kissing her on the neck, grinding and bumping
    As always and forever played Joe started pumping
    Then all of a sudden he stopped and frown
    Pushed that freaky chick down to the ground
    Came over to me as I was laughing so hard I couldn’t stand
    He said Bishop you knew all along that was a man
    I said yeah Creeping Joe but what made you see
    Creeping Joe looked at me and said while I was poking him, the brotha was poking me….
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Bishop,

    This piece is something else :laugh: I enjoyed the read. Thanks......I'm curious, is this a true story?

    Madd Sistahly Love :heart:
    CCBSKYN
     
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    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Shonuff Coco.....True as I am....
     
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    Bishop,

    Has it slowed his creep down any? :laugh:

    CCBSKYN:heart:
     
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    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    naw, he still tries his luck....
     
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    I heard that......Thats men and their love of women:)
    Well, thanks for the read. Again, I enjoyed it totally.

    CCBSKYN:heart:
     
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    Now Bishop.....

    This is a comedic flow, with the operations
    and disguises its hard to know, gotta look real
    close before you get on the dance floor.....:look:

    epiphany :heart:
     
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    LMAO

    THIS WAS A VERY WELL WRITTEN AND DESCRIPTIVE FLOW
    I CAN ALMOST SEE HIS EXPRESSION AT THAT REVELATION.
    KEEP IT COMIN:D
     
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    this was well felt and heard u expressed it so well
    brutha BISHOP
     
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    I guess he better look harder before he leaps...this sure was funny, I guess it does happen sometimes.
     
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