Black Poetry : Creator I am still your child

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  1. cuvriefloesta

    cuvriefloesta Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Creator I am still your child
    but I find myself lost
    because the world is hard
    I'm sure you know that cause you made it
    and sometimes my curiosity gets the best of me
    and I wonder why you would even create it
    The world has so many questions that I must ask
    but sometimes they cause me to question you
    I would say that I don't do it intentionally
    but I'm sure you know that too
    My life has been flipped up and down so much
    I can't tell which from which
    but we both know
    that you know
    and you know i won't quit
    I mean I know I'm no one to question you
    but we both know that I will
    Why did you make me so weak?
    Don't answer that...better still
    why would you give me the mind to doubt?
    When WE BOTH KNOW you love is true
    I'll always be your child
    but I pray you teach me obedience too
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    my dear poet this is a very wonderful flow you have produce on this blank canvas ..and i do indeed feel the strenght within..flow on poet..there is nothing wrong with asking questions.
    much love to you...:grouphug:
    very nice drop
    Peace
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was warm and real feeling da depth
    of questions asked surely to be answered
    very wonderful scribe
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for bringing this to us

    As it inspires.
     
  5. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :huh: hey i like you.....


    i mean i feel you.....:wave:welcome...


    i like youre little icon in the left.....it makes me smile...





    Much love..keep writing..



    Love l
     
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