Black Poetry : Creation

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  1. Luver2B

    Luver2B Active Member MEMBER

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    Creation

    While stroking her into dream shape
    The canvas' skin became silk drape
    I felt like the maker, creating Eve
    Giving her soul a place to live
    As an artist I draw my world
    Like a poet seducing words
    The life between these lines I draw
    Comes to me blind, naked, and raw
    This sweet burden was handed to me
    I am a messenger love speaks in me
    With my last stroke I must still scream
    A women was God's greatest dream
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Luver2B

    ...and you ain't never lied.

    I thank GOD everyday for that dream...for that dream GOD made into reality. Hey, the majority of my dreams are about Black women. :lol: :D

    :thanks: for sharing a part of you with us.

    :toast:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    And whata lovely creation this was, very nice write.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very very on point work dat pen !!
     
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    nice drop
    likes this one
     
  6. Luver2B

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    Thank you all for checking it out, I am glad it could have stroke a cord in you, thank you for the love.
     
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