Quiet Poetry Lounge : Created With Love

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MRS. LADY, May 5, 2008.

  1. MRS. LADY

    MRS. LADY Banned MEMBER

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    My intuition
    Puts me in the right position
    In the right state of mind
    To rhyme
    In and out of the
    Infinity of time
    The design
    I create
    Is of knock out style
    Although not a heavy weight
    Rather I encompass the heart
    Of a feather weight
    And it's never to late
    To re-create
    Aside with complacent hate
    Love won't wait
    To be Great
    But
    Hate would love to forsake
    Those awake
    Ready to re-take
    The ideas or the pre-conception
    of all
    Of our creations
    But best beleive
    Anything conceived
    By she
    Was only out
    Of Love
     
  2. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi Miss Lady
    Wonderful drop of poetry sis
    "Love won't wait
    To be Great"
    That is a beautiful line.
    That is a great motto
    All life that is given is a gift
    I feel these lines as well
    "Anything conceived
    By she
    Was only out
    Of Love"
    You have orchestrated a lovely
    musican flow of words.

    Peace
     
  3. phynxofkemet

    phynxofkemet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nicely put...

    :welldone:
    Love is truly the source now isn't it? It's what remains after all is said and done, and what we return to ultimately. Nice write Sister.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    can't change what it is when love is the key to it all .....awesome scribe
     
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    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    DEEP! Created out of Love. Ad This Was! FLow On....I reeeeaally Liked this
     
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    really like this flow........very inspiring................
     
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    Enjoyed the rhymes, the pace, and the message of love in this piece poetess.
     
  8. LovesDestiny

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    Excellent flow my sistah!!!!! As usual!
     
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