Black Poetry : Create Debate

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by 1poetsought, May 3, 2004.

  1. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It's time to create
    Sister,
    Don't delay
    Brother,
    Bow and pray :bowdown:
    Help us shape the clay

    I'm jingling away
    A lyricist ~
    At play...
    We're heads of state
    Facilitate debate :grouphug:

    Feel the Creator
    Living,
    Adminstrator...
    All creation's waiting
    Testing God's patience

    God ain't mistaken
    Your world is shaken
    Prophecy,
    Is in the making
    Awaken...
    Don't be taken

    Create debate,
    Ain't another quake :teach:
    It don't pass the plate
    All praise :star:
    To Him,
    He's Great!


    Darryl Abdu Omari
    aka 1poetsought copyright 2004
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed indeed
    create
    feel the creator
    don't wait
    in da debate
    create
    befor taken
    shaken
    in the fold
    to be rolled
    create
    in faithfulness
    with heavy
    holyness
    debater
    the creator
    of hold
    lyrical mold
    create
    let it be told
    from the
    creation
    just create
    da debate

    Tyte drop well created and mastered
    the pen powerful and flowing in waves
     
  3. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I felt the rhyme in this piece...I like where you took this...keep it coming and thanks for sharing.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sounds like a spiritual creation, flow it as you know it.
     
  5. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    PROPHETICALLY AND POETICALLY WELL SPOKEN!

    This was a wonderful journey of prophetic messages and spiritual wisdoms.
    Enjoyed the read very much, but I expect no less than that from you...
    PROPHETICALLY POETICALLY PERFECT! :D
    BLESSINGS ON YOUR HOUSE!
     
  6. Joyce

    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :spinn: It is always refreshing to read poetry which promotes healing. Sometimes healing has to come on a tablespoon of warning. This poem is a beautiful expression of both.

    God ain't mistaken
    Your world is shaken
    Prophecy,
    Is in the making
    Awaken...
    Don't be taken



    Joyce
     
  7. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It is especially pleasing to give you something that you can feel, thanks.
     
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    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice concept and flow, very nice drop :star:
     
  9. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    all I can say is *Amen* and *Amen* again...

    because the writing is on the wall...

    speak on word warrior....

    you're definitely not wasting words...but making them count
     
  10. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Amen
    love the vibe i got from this
    flow on very nice
    ....Angel
     
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